|Reviews for The Other Twin|
| heartstrings13 chapter 13 . 3/9
Just awesome ️
| bearygirl chapter 13 . 11/8/2017
Really enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing.
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/8/2017
How stupid is he? Doesn't he have questions about stretch marks?
| LadySixx chapter 13 . 9/16/2017
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/8/2017
| iluvtwilight60 chapter 13 . 4/19/2017
Just read this story in one go. Loved it.
Thank you for writing and sharing :)
| ummmm chapter 13 . 3/28/2017
the end? are you fucking kidding? I WONDER HOW BELLA WOULD FEEL IF SHE KNEW HER ...WHATEVER EDWARD IS ...BOYFRIEND KNEW HER MOTHER WAS KILLED BY HER SISTER AND DIDNT TELL HER.
HER MOM WAS MURDERED AND EDWARD IS KEEPING IT FROM HER...HAVING HER RAISE HER SISTERS AND HIS KID...AND ITS ALL GOOD THE END?
JESUS THIS IS DUMB AS FUCK
| jk chapter 12 . 3/28/2017
two chapters later and bella hasn't said one fucking thing about Edward lusting after her SISTER...why the hell is that? bella doesn't care at all...that she came to town and STOLE HER SISTERS HUSBAND...ITS FUCKING SICK...EDWARD IS FUCKING SICK..HE KEEPS SAYING EMMA IS YOURS BLAH BLAH BUT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SHE FUCKING ISNT! BELLA IS EMMAS AUNT! its gross...shes willing to be auntymom without even a thought of what the implys
| jk chapter 11 . 3/28/2017
where the fuck is the "your married to my sister!" conversation? Also... why is most of the dialogue written
without " "...it makes it
really hard to tell that someone
is still talking
| jk chapter 9 . 3/28/2017
I don't know why the FUCK Edward is grinning at the end of chapter 9...he fucked her sister...had a fucking kid with her...and...AND isabellas and Edward kids will be not only siblings but cousins to emma...how fucking gross is that...its wrong any way you dice it... if I was Isabella and found out Edward had been in love with and been with my sister id fucking leave his ass in a heartbeat...that's a motherfucking NO NO
| jk chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
yaaa this is all well and good except...ive read a story almost exactly like this...AND theres still the whole...you LOVED AND FUCKED AND HAD A BABY WITH MY SISTER PART OF THE STORY...and how ANY girl could live with that is fucking beyond me...its fucking nasty
| Ayina11 chapter 2 . 11/16/2016
God, I love your joke about Charlienot handsome enough to be related with the Cullen.
| soonbefound chapter 13 . 9/26/2016
LOVE THIS THE BEST STORY ABOUT TWIN ALWAYS
| Kitty16kat chapter 1 . 8/31/2016
I love your story so much
| Merey chapter 13 . 4/26/2016
I read this whole story and I loved all of it. I usually get bored with stories and stop reading 2/3 of the way through. But your story was so good I just kept reading. Thank you so much for sharing it.
I hope you are doing well and still writing. You have a real talent.