Reviews for The Girl in the Squad
gogo bananas chapter 1 . 5/9/2020
bruh you capped
no.intro.04 chapter 6 . 1/4/2020
gogo bananas chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
Fucking make this story dude cmon
tH1s chapter 6 . 5/28/2018
I love the world you made. This is really interesting stuff, more so than its prequel. It saddens me that you did this story the ending it deserves but I will take what I can get. Your version of Hanabi has become my favorite
thatonecorellian chapter 6 . 6/27/2017
With both of these stories you have successfully managed to make Hanabi my favorite character.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/31/2016
Well I'm slightly "disappointed" that this was the end but if it's what neoprene really feeling then it is what it is. I just wish we got more Shinku screen time after all of his crazy power ups.

Oh well, good luck with everything.
Roransted chapter 2 . 10/28/2016
I know it's a Hanabi centric fiction but I hope the other still get decent screen time!
Roransted chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
I'm surprised to see that the sequel is Hanabi centric. I hope Shinku is still a large part in it but I guess we'll see!
Guest chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
The end? After all that OMINOUS? I mean, truly? You could have at least had, I don't know, a Kakashi throw-back? Welp, whatever. The prequel was good, and I suppose I can be sated with a reread.
Kit chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
I guess you took the honorable road and finished the story before you had to commit. And at least you didn't quite the story and leave it hanging there. But man, what a disappointment. I get what your saying and all so its not a big deal or anything, just... yah.
halas chapter 6 . 11/23/2014
Aww I'm going to miss this story and this 'verse and you! Hope your writing stays as good as always even though you're done. And hope you have a wonderful year ahead. Good luck with all your endeavors!
Impstar chapter 6 . 11/19/2014
Eh, on the one hand I was fully expecting this story to go on much longer. On the other... it kind of fits. If you did want to flesh out this universe more like you implied during the ending of The Boy on the Team another sequel would be better.

Thanks for writing this though.
kaname aosoge chapter 6 . 11/5/2014
Hmmm, are you sure you don't wanna go back to writing this? There's a revolver pressed to your temple :)
Mafioso, you drive a hard bargain. But I am persistence reborn. Are you sure you don't wanna go back to writing this? There's a lambhorgini Veneno waitin' outside, just for you...
How about...
dasross chapter 6 . 11/7/2014
Aw man this history was so good...but I guess its better to stop than to force yourself to write, it might spoil a masterpiece
Vikraal chapter 6 . 11/5/2014
A positive end here, means the moon will fall or explode, or alien invasion or all of them.
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