Reviews for Koishi's Outside World Venture!
dragon matt blue chapter 1 . 4/20
great chapter , Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon
dragon matt blue chapter 2 . 3/28
great chapter , Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25
Interesting premise, though there quite a lot of grammar mistakes. I'm not that familiar with Sekirei, but did you get the Akitsu scene from In Flight?
Guest chapter 3 . 3/22
Most manly sekirei... Arg why isn't sekirei a yaoi manga... The manga artist also does yaoi under another pen name.

Poor Mutsu... Well it's better that he landed on Miya rather than Karasuba... At least he will live if not traumatized by the Hannya Mask.
stylus legna chapter 1 . 3/23
So many lolz. So many d'awws. Truly, this is going to be good.

Anyways, there were only a few errors, which is good. Also, who is that mysterious "he" that Koishi is speaking of in the middle of the chapter? And yes, Millet Soup is great. We need more KoaXShanghai!
Sonanoka21093 chapter 3 . 3/22
Good try! It's not easy to reach 10k words. Trust me, it took me over 2 years to do it. I only just released my first chapter that was bigger than that a couple days ago. And boy was it big! 18.8k words. I was sooooo close to 20k... I doubt I'll ever make a chapter that big at this rate. Anyways, that was an interesting trick! I quite enjoyed Koishi's hat trick. Also, you reminded me of Heart Throbbing Adventure for a moment with that comment on destroying hats! Nice job!
ArsNotAnUnversed chapter 3 . 3/22
Poor Mutsu and Yomi, hope they still alive in next chapter...
Oh, and great story here, keep it up!
pltrgst chapter 3 . 3/22
some lines seem jumbled.. or is that koishi?
sanddrake111 chapter 3 . 3/22
Oh god, are you trying to kill me? Death by laughter does not sound like a good way to die... Jokes aside, barring a few missing words, the chapter is as hilarious as usual, especially Yukari's trolling! And let me try to list out as many references from other franchises as I could find.

Love Can Bloom, I wonder if this is just a coincidence, but there was a famous Human X Alien Elf (Eldar) fanfic by that very name.

But everything changed when the Sekirei attacked, obvious Avatar reference.

The infamous Falcon Punch.

That's all I could get, wonder if I missed any? Will be waiting warmly for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/14
no shit sherlock but is so great aniway
ArsNotAnUnversed chapter 2 . 3/13
Great story!
Keep it up :D
Bladedknight chapter 1 . 3/10
Hmm... an overpowered ability to control the subconscious...

Ah! Here we go, controlling the subconsciousness to cause people to preform mass homicide. Or gathering all the Sekireis together and having them all having a subconscious desire to just finish the war right there and then.

It's an overpowered ability to move the plot forward if anything...
WanderingWriter79 chapter 2 . 3/8
Ah zany shenanigans, how you amuse me so.
EVA-Saiyajin chapter 2 . 3/7
Amusing and heartwarming at the same time. Good characterization for Akitsu.
EVA-Saiyajin chapter 1 . 3/7
Well now, this is interesting. Pretty well written thus far, amusing characterization, and best of all, not a rehash of In Flight.
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