Reviews for The Lies We Tell Ourselves
Guest chapter 10 . 5/17
yeah i think it is good written but i like your dragon age fiction the sexual content is so much that is a bit boring to read it in every chapter specially because it did nothing to develop the plot h
Guest chapter 10 . 11/19/2015
please continue this story, this is the most amazing elsanna fanfic that I ever read
Dichotomus chapter 7 . 11/18/2015
Well, I like the way you are developing the characters; smut and all. I was a little put off by earlier events in your story, but I kept with it and I'm glad I did. This chapter was both beautiful and sexy.

Good work.
Dichotomus chapter 2 . 11/15/2015
...well, this one is definitely taking the elsanna ship deep into fucked up waters. Anna is kind of a slut-keeping a boyfriend just cause she likes the sex while two timing with someone else; there's no justifying that.
RachellovesRain chapter 3 . 11/2/2015
Oh my God you are such a talent writter. Damn, this chapter is amusing and sexy as hell. I did smile a lot. Thank u so muchhhhhh
Theunder017 chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
I really don't feel like moving. Much less reviewing. I can't be bothered to even go get breakfast right now.

But God damn it. Your characters (especially your Anna) are so vivid. I wouldn't care what kind of setting they were in, it would be an engrossing tale.

Their quirks and back story, their vocab. It's just all a marvel.

I see this hasn't been updated in like a year. And that's fine. The last chapter serves as a pseudo ending.

But maybe a "3 years later" kind of epilogue? Just one short scene? Just anything with these particular sisters would be wonderful.

I sincerely hope the situation you talked about has gotten better. And I hope this past year has been kind to you.

Thank you for giving us this story. It's a cool Christmas gift in the middle of the summer.

Take care,
FragglesRock chapter 10 . 8/9/2015
I know it's been a while, but do you have nay plans to Finnish this story?
sedryn chapter 10 . 6/2/2015
I am sorry to read about your latest A/N. I hope you will get to write another chapter, and thank you for this work :)
Guest chapter 9 . 5/6/2015
Your skills as an authors have improved Greatly, js
HelloNurse chapter 10 . 3/1/2015
Any chance of you continuing this story?
mpsantiago chapter 10 . 2/27/2015
Wow concentrated, weapons-grade smut...believe me I don't use that as a pejorative because who doesn't like a little smut in their fanfic. But if a little smut is your hot chocolate made with a gentle squeeze of Hershey's syrup, this story was unscrewing the cap on the bottle and just pouring the goop down your throat :)

In between Anna and Elsa going at each other like bunnies on ecstasy is an attempt at a real story but it has trouble achieving lift off. That may have been the author's intent - less straight up porn and more like your late night cable erotica. Enjoy it for what it is.
inter-outre chapter 10 . 2/1/2015
Wow... this tale moved me deeply. It's one of those stories that once you dig to the core - get past all the explicit and taboo (albeit exquisite and endlessly fun) aspects - it is so heartbreakingly beautiful. Perhaps that's why it shook me so: with all that society sees as being wrong with the relationship presented herein, how could they not love each other? Gorgeously written and wonderful character development. You have a gift; don't let it slip away. :)
Ignis Aurum Probat chapter 10 . 1/2/2015
Wow. First I am so sorry about your father. My deepest condolences. I hope you get to a better place. Second this a great stepy. Just binge read it all. I completely understand that you stopped it but if u have the time this story really has potential. Your character development is perfect and real. The timeline was a bit confusing. Web did anna run away? When did she suicide? I just didn't have a clear timeline in my head. Anyways this story is fantastic and how the he'll do they do it 16 times. Animals lol. Whatever you choose ill support you because I know you've been super brave with your dad. Happy new years. May the new year bring you and your famiy happiness and prosperity. Elsanna forever 3
Dianwei32 chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
For this being outside of your comfort zone, it's extremely well done. Excellent job, and I'm eagerly looking forward to more.
kenfromnhus chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
Very nice 1st chapter.
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