Reviews for The Lies We Tell Ourselves
HelloNurse chapter 10 . 3/1
Any chance of you continuing this story?
mpsantiago chapter 10 . 2/27
Wow concentrated, weapons-grade smut...believe me I don't use that as a pejorative because who doesn't like a little smut in their fanfic. But if a little smut is your hot chocolate made with a gentle squeeze of Hershey's syrup, this story was unscrewing the cap on the bottle and just pouring the goop down your throat :)

In between Anna and Elsa going at each other like bunnies on ecstasy is an attempt at a real story but it has trouble achieving lift off. That may have been the author's intent - less straight up porn and more like your late night cable erotica. Enjoy it for what it is.
inter-outre chapter 10 . 2/1
Wow... this tale moved me deeply. It's one of those stories that once you dig to the core - get past all the explicit and taboo (albeit exquisite and endlessly fun) aspects - it is so heartbreakingly beautiful. Perhaps that's why it shook me so: with all that society sees as being wrong with the relationship presented herein, how could they not love each other? Gorgeously written and wonderful character development. You have a gift; don't let it slip away. :)
Ignis Aurum Probat chapter 10 . 1/2
Wow. First I am so sorry about your father. My deepest condolences. I hope you get to a better place. Second this a great stepy. Just binge read it all. I completely understand that you stopped it but if u have the time this story really has potential. Your character development is perfect and real. The timeline was a bit confusing. Web did anna run away? When did she suicide? I just didn't have a clear timeline in my head. Anyways this story is fantastic and how the he'll do they do it 16 times. Animals lol. Whatever you choose ill support you because I know you've been super brave with your dad. Happy new years. May the new year bring you and your famiy happiness and prosperity. Elsanna forever 3
Dianwei32 chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
For this being outside of your comfort zone, it's extremely well done. Excellent job, and I'm eagerly looking forward to more.
kenfromnhus chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
Very nice 1st chapter.
JokersLastLaugh chapter 10 . 11/26/2014
This was a good story and I liked reading it.
CratorsO43 chapter 10 . 11/17/2014
I know it's been awhile, but I really hope you continue this story.
sklpper chapter 3 . 11/13/2014
this fic is golden hahhaa
sklpper chapter 2 . 11/13/2014
another awesome chapter
sklpper chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
this is fuckin awesome
Lorca chapter 10 . 10/30/2014
Do you plan to continue this story?
Because, you really should.
smilingpuddle chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Wow. Very impressive for your first smut. ;)
lnuit chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
Well if this first chapter is any indication I'd say you write quite well outside your comfort zone and all of my body parts are still fully functional. Yea... let's just move on to the next chapter.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/15/2014
The chapter was good. Nice to have a little back story about how Anna and Elsa first started having feelings for each other. Helps flesh the characters out more.
And I hope everything's going well with your father...I bet it's tough:( my prayers go to you and your family.
Take your time with the next update, family and your life come first before a little fic (no matter how good it is).
-AQueenThatIsFrozen
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