Reviews for First Times
Lance58 chapter 1 . 8/10
Oh wow.. Just wow.. I'm speechless! You really made it work.. It's perfect and their personality also.. I love it.. It feels realistic and also th emotions you conveyed them well.. Please continue writing more!
Kagosha chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
I liked the flow of this fanfic. It wasn't as direct, it was more realistic, I think, and cute how they constantly were checking for confirmation of if it was ok to take the next step. I could see Lightning being more shy than Fang though.
wunderwolfer chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Really cute and a great prompt well executed
Gcohen chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Excellent job! I really loved the idea behind this story, it was completly sweet and smutty at the same time.
ScarletWolfx chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
This was really good, loved it very much :D
Hiroseki chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
Awww this was so cute and sexy at the same time great job
moonpie chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
This is really good! very sexy
angels123 chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
great story! and the bed scene is hot! hope you make more Flight stories!
Icy-Windbreeze chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
A very interesting one-shoot!
Socially Introverted chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
*clears throat* I loved it! It got the nice desired effect down south. By the goddess... Now I can't sleep... -.-
Anima11 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Hey hey,

das ist wirklich mal was Neues. Gut gemacht.

I like it;)
roxyroxas1313 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Nice job! I really loved it. ;)
Sequel anytime soon?
deadaccount66644 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
you already know but I'll say it again...I love this!
It's great having you writing for Fangrai and I really really hope you plan to do it again sometime. I will always read review your work. Also really glad you did this prompt I was hoping someone would, it's a great prompt!

Keep it up, Fantastic!