|Reviews for First Times|
| Lance58 chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
Oh wow.. Just wow.. I'm speechless! You really made it work.. It's perfect and their personality also.. I love it.. It feels realistic and also th emotions you conveyed them well.. Please continue writing more!
| Kagosha chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
I liked the flow of this fanfic. It wasn't as direct, it was more realistic, I think, and cute how they constantly were checking for confirmation of if it was ok to take the next step. I could see Lightning being more shy than Fang though.
| wunderwolfer chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Really cute and a great prompt well executed
| Gcohen chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Excellent job! I really loved the idea behind this story, it was completly sweet and smutty at the same time.
| ScarletWolfx chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
This was really good, loved it very much :D
| Hiroseki chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
Awww this was so cute and sexy at the same time great job
| moonpie chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
This is really good! very sexy
| Mr.Ncguy chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
great story! and the bed scene is hot! hope you make more Flight stories!
| Icy-Windbreeze chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
A very interesting one-shoot!
| Socially Introverted chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
*clears throat* I loved it! It got the nice desired effect down south. By the goddess... Now I can't sleep... -.-
| Anima11 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
das ist wirklich mal was Neues. Gut gemacht.
I like it;)
| roxyroxas1313 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Nice job! I really loved it. ;)
Sequel anytime soon?
| Kay-Yun chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
you already know but I'll say it again...I love this!
It's great having you writing for Fangrai and I really really hope you plan to do it again sometime. I will always read review your work. Also really glad you did this prompt I was hoping someone would, it's a great prompt!
Keep it up, Fantastic!