Reviews for Life on Plastic Beach
The Critic chapter 4 . 3/17/2014
Nice story, the only problem I see is the lack of proper wording. Sentences such like "2D squirmed under Murdoc; the bassist was hovering over him on the couch." should make sense in order for the reader to understand. If you are going to post the story in public, you should pretend to be the reader and erase all memory of what was in your head while writing; then you'll get my point. Is Murdoc actually floating over 2D? Or is he on top of him instead?
Mentalcase50 chapter 4 . 3/13/2014
WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOO!
heidipoo chapter 4 . 3/13/2014
Haha, there's just something about the two that make me laugh. We should write this pairing together. Update soon.
heidipoo chapter 3 . 3/8/2014
UPDATE SOON
Mentalcase50 chapter 3 . 3/8/2014
Awesome!
Mentalcase50 chapter 2 . 3/5/2014
KEEP 'EM COMIN'!
heidipoo chapter 2 . 3/5/2014
Love it.
heidipoo chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Love it
Update soon.
Mentalcase50 chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
More plz!