Reviews for Outsiders
Rohirrim Girl 2187 chapter 26 . 5/26/2016
It's been a while since you've updated this story.
harrgn chapter 26 . 2/25/2016
I love this story as much as I love Bell's Journey. I love that Mariah has a beautiful daughter named Stacia. This is a beautiful love and journey story. Can you finish it please. It is one of your best stories like Bell's Journey. Love you.
Sortinghat chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
This chapter is pretty generic for even most of these types. Guess they are right about a sucker being born every minute.
Guest chapter 26 . 7/20/2015
I like your story
Guest chapter 26 . 7/8/2015
I like your story.
Guest chapter 26 . 6/10/2015
Please finish the story please
alexma chapter 26 . 5/14/2015
really excited for your next chapter, please update soon thanks
samanthatm chapter 26 . 2/12/2015
Can't wait for the next update.
musicluver17 chapter 26 . 1/15/2015
Looking forward to reading the next chapter
Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 26 . 1/13/2015
Of all the songs you've put in here, I only haven't ever heard one before, and that was from a previous chapter. I enjoyed all of them. Ye know what would be a good song for her and Anna to sing together, when they're all reunited and it's a seemingly happy ending? When You Believe, from Prince of Egypt. I feel like it would match the quest of the dwarfs.

I hope Stacia and Mariah stay in the mountain though, even after Thorin gets angry at her. It's probably the safest place for them during the big battle. How angry Thorin will be with her, I don't know. I've read multiple fanfictions where his sickness goes both ways; better in one story, worse in another. I mean, I know Mariah has to get between Thorin and Azog on the ice, but I don't like the thought of Stacia being in the town when it's overrun with orcs. Update soon!
EvilBunny91 chapter 26 . 1/11/2015
Amazing story so far. Glad to see you've updated, it's been a long time.

Hate to point to out a tiny mistake you made. You wrote Stacia was being entertained By Bofur, but Bofur's at Dale, not at the Mountain. Not really a signficant mistake, just letting you know.

I was kinda hoping it would be Stacia who sneaked into the Mountains. It would have a rather hilarious scene when they would have noticed her absent, and Mariah freaking out and possibly shouting at Thorin when he'd try to calm her. Something like: "Don't you "calm down, love" me mister, my daughter's inside a dragon's lair!" xD

Mariah starting to get all the attention here anyway. I understand she's the main OC, and it's her destiny to save Thorin. but try to give Stacia and Anna some attention too.

Anyway, update soon!
Jo chapter 26 . 1/11/2015
That's okay, belated Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! an epic and brilliant chapter!
BloodyTink chapter 26 . 1/11/2015
OMG! You're back! I thought you disappeared forever. And I totally understand the writer's block thing. We've all been through it. Great job
Noxy the Proxy chapter 26 . 1/10/2015
Oh so much fun! I wonder what happens next! and in the chapters that follow!
xxxMadameMysteryxxx chapter 26 . 1/10/2015
Gr8 chapter I'm glad you've updated this story again it's one of my favourites, plz update soon : )
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