Reviews for Outsiders
samanthatm chapter 26 . 2/12
Can't wait for the next update.
musicluver17 chapter 26 . 1/15
Looking forward to reading the next chapter
Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 26 . 1/13
Of all the songs you've put in here, I only haven't ever heard one before, and that was from a previous chapter. I enjoyed all of them. Ye know what would be a good song for her and Anna to sing together, when they're all reunited and it's a seemingly happy ending? When You Believe, from Prince of Egypt. I feel like it would match the quest of the dwarfs.

I hope Stacia and Mariah stay in the mountain though, even after Thorin gets angry at her. It's probably the safest place for them during the big battle. How angry Thorin will be with her, I don't know. I've read multiple fanfictions where his sickness goes both ways; better in one story, worse in another. I mean, I know Mariah has to get between Thorin and Azog on the ice, but I don't like the thought of Stacia being in the town when it's overrun with orcs. Update soon!
EvilBunny91 chapter 26 . 1/11
Amazing story so far. Glad to see you've updated, it's been a long time.

Hate to point to out a tiny mistake you made. You wrote Stacia was being entertained By Bofur, but Bofur's at Dale, not at the Mountain. Not really a signficant mistake, just letting you know.

I was kinda hoping it would be Stacia who sneaked into the Mountains. It would have a rather hilarious scene when they would have noticed her absent, and Mariah freaking out and possibly shouting at Thorin when he'd try to calm her. Something like: "Don't you "calm down, love" me mister, my daughter's inside a dragon's lair!" xD

Mariah starting to get all the attention here anyway. I understand she's the main OC, and it's her destiny to save Thorin. but try to give Stacia and Anna some attention too.

Anyway, update soon!
Jo chapter 26 . 1/11
That's okay, belated Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! an epic and brilliant chapter!
BloodyTink chapter 26 . 1/11
OMG! You're back! I thought you disappeared forever. And I totally understand the writer's block thing. We've all been through it. Great job
Noxy the Proxy chapter 26 . 1/10
Oh so much fun! I wonder what happens next! and in the chapters that follow!
xxxMadameMysteryxxx chapter 26 . 1/10
Gr8 chapter I'm glad you've updated this story again it's one of my favourites, plz update soon : )
musicluver17 chapter 25 . 10/14/2014
I really hope that you continue this
MaxRideandPercyJackson4ever chapter 25 . 8/18/2014
Update asap
Luckygirl1013 chapter 25 . 8/17/2014
Please update again this was really good! :)
Through the Mirror Darkly chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Have to say, love the story because 1.) my name is Mariah and 2.) you have a really good start. A couple of things to note is spelling, softmore should be sophmore and maybe try adding a little more details when describing things. Anyways, it's a good start and I'm off to read the next chapter. Thank you for sharing this story! :D
xxxMadameMysteryxxx chapter 25 . 4/26/2014
gr8 chapter plz update soon : )
xxxMadameMysteryxxx chapter 24 . 4/24/2014
Gr8 chapter plz update soon : )
xxxMadameMysteryxxx chapter 23 . 4/19/2014
Gr8 chapter plz update soon : )
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