Reviews for The Many Mistakes of an Old Man
Potterformers chapter 6 . 9/26/2014
for the greater good of his own design though, but the greater good none the less
god of all chapter 8 . 9/26/2014
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 7 . 9/26/2014
Hmm... Still no indication of Hermione liking Draco other than the author's notes...
This chapter was quite rushed if you ask me...
Good going...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 6 . 9/26/2014
No... I can't really see anything strange b/w Draco and Hermione... though the flirting part might be very slightly true...
This chapter was much better...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 4 . 9/26/2014
Hmm... That's sudden and the circumstances aren't explained...
Make sure you explain at-least some of the stuff you wrote..
Longer chapter but lot left unsaid...
Lets see where it goes...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 3 . 9/26/2014
A bit longer than before I see...
Good...
The plot though requires a bit of work...
Keep up the good work...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 2 . 9/26/2014
A bit too short don't you think?
Another problem is that the will is quite short as well...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
This is actually a catchy start...
The concept so far looks promising...
Lets see where it goes...
geetac chapter 8 . 9/25/2014
I like the chapter
FURIOUS-PRIME chapter 8 . 9/25/2014
I've read A/N's longer than this...
Why do you torment us so?
snape chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
hello. brilliant story, really.
Jewels46 chapter 7 . 8/17/2014
Just started reading your story, but I'm enjoying it so far. I'm very interested to see where you take it, so please try to update soon :)
GWPotter chapter 4 . 7/29/2014
Dear ff writer

If u want us reader to take u seriously please stop writting like a ten years old. " thats all peeps" honestly? Please stop using ( authors note) in between stories its annoying. And if u want to reply on your reviewr there is a reply button on your private message there is a reason it was put in there. And by the way its Andromeda not Annabelle. After reading chapter 3 i cant take anymore childish authors note that asking for desperate reviews...good luck anyway. I am sure someone is better than me giving a constructive criticism. Theres more to writting fanfiction HP than having a go at it.
Olaf74 chapter 7 . 7/29/2014
*simply rubs his hands in anticipation of more chapters* :)
Lilykees chapter 7 . 7/28/2014
OK Lavernder Please Please for the love of all that is holy please do not have Harry with her. He belongs with Ginny! Why is Lavernder there any way. she is not really part of the group.
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