Reviews for The Many Mistakes of an Old Man
rowenasheir chapter 1 . 7/14
may your gold increase and your enemies lie under your feet
Potterformers chapter 6 . 9/26/2014
for the greater good of his own design though, but the greater good none the less
god of all chapter 8 . 9/26/2014
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 7 . 9/26/2014
Hmm... Still no indication of Hermione liking Draco other than the author's notes...
This chapter was quite rushed if you ask me...
Good going...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 6 . 9/26/2014
No... I can't really see anything strange b/w Draco and Hermione... though the flirting part might be very slightly true...
This chapter was much better...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 4 . 9/26/2014
Hmm... That's sudden and the circumstances aren't explained...
Make sure you explain at-least some of the stuff you wrote..
Longer chapter but lot left unsaid...
Lets see where it goes...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 3 . 9/26/2014
A bit longer than before I see...
Good...
The plot though requires a bit of work...
Keep up the good work...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 2 . 9/26/2014
A bit too short don't you think?
Another problem is that the will is quite short as well...
J. Jamie Dupane chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
This is actually a catchy start...
The concept so far looks promising...
Lets see where it goes...
geetac chapter 8 . 9/25/2014
I like the chapter
FURIOUS-PRIME chapter 8 . 9/25/2014
I've read A/N's longer than this...
Why do you torment us so?
snape chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
hello. brilliant story, really.
Jewels46 chapter 7 . 8/17/2014
Just started reading your story, but I'm enjoying it so far. I'm very interested to see where you take it, so please try to update soon :)
GWPotter chapter 4 . 7/29/2014
Dear ff writer

If u want us reader to take u seriously please stop writting like a ten years old. " thats all peeps" honestly? Please stop using ( authors note) in between stories its annoying. And if u want to reply on your reviewr there is a reply button on your private message there is a reason it was put in there. And by the way its Andromeda not Annabelle. After reading chapter 3 i cant take anymore childish authors note that asking for desperate reviews...good luck anyway. I am sure someone is better than me giving a constructive criticism. Theres more to writting fanfiction HP than having a go at it.
Olaf74 chapter 7 . 7/29/2014
*simply rubs his hands in anticipation of more chapters* :)
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