Wonderful final chapter. Well placed humor is an amazing thing.
-C

This is such a delightful story. I’ve always remained curious as to what that little warning did, if anything at all, how it may have shaped the history and fate of a legion, or prove to be as much a failure at its duty as Lorgar was to staying loyal.

Bloody brilliant, fellow author. Between this and Carrow, you’ve got a lifelong reader out of me!

Great fic, really enjoyed the read

I thought he got possessed by Magnus but nope, regular old Thousand Son. But I wonder Pre-or Post-Heresy?

This is the most incredible thing I've ever read.

Wonderfully wierd. Well told.

That was a fun story! I kept expecting things to escalate and escalate until we got to Carrow levels but I appreciate the more subtle approach. Well, as subtle as 40k can get. The idea of experimenting on the horcruxes and affecting Voldemort (and how it did so) was very entertaining. At first I thought it was general wackiness or your own spin on Voldy but the explaination and seeing their testing was fun. HarryAtum and Luna played well off each other too. And although I would have liked to see how it came about exactly, I enjoyed the epilogue and that they ended up together.
Thanks for writing this for all of us!

This was a pretty fun read.

I was chuckling and laughing the whole way through, it reminded me of reading the hitchhikers guide.

Great "Short" story :D

I have never before been brought to laughter by the first line of a chapter, in any story. Well done, and well played. Please tell me it’s supposed to be a reference to Blackadder, otherwise I’ll feel silly having laughed so easily so quickly.

Absolutely fantastic story. I should have found it ages ago.

this story is hilarious

A wonderful end to a wonderful little story. I do so enjoy the trope of mixxing space marines into normal society. Mixing a pseudo marine into an already strange society is even better. Thank you

Holyyyy, thanks for the story friend!

Now... if only we could see how he’d react to what became of the Thousand Sons post-Heresy. Things like the Rubicae, Ahriman, or even what became of Magnus and/or Prospero... I have a feeling that it would be glorious.

Anyhow, great work here, and here’s hoping that you’re sending more good stuff our way!

I just realised... if the warning got through, and as a result Magnus doesn’t screw up the Emperor’s Webway Project, Prospero doesn’t burn at the hands of the Space Wolves? And if Prospero doesn’t burn, Magnus doesn’t become a Daemon Primarch? Huh...

I’m just leaning back here and trying to imagine the ripples, but failing all the same. That’s why I love this fic to death; it gets you thinking!