Reviews for Between Two Points
RainbowKitteh13 chapter 28 . 8/30
it's been almost a year...please update I'm dying to read more
LunchboxDog chapter 28 . 7/27
So, I haven't reviewed any other chapters because I didn't want to stop reading long enough. *Spoilers ahead*

I was so effing pissed at you for having Eirlys arranged in marriage. I know she knew it would happen, but literally, literally, I cried so hard (literal tears streaming down my face) and I yelled and I told my boyfriend that it hurt too much for me to continue to read and I was so so mad at you for hurting me that way.

I've sort of, mostly forgive you.

I've had a really hard time finding a Loki fic that I like. Most of them either have poor plots/storylines, portray Loki in a way I don't like, or are poorly written. Besides the bump in the relationship with the whole arranged marriage (SEVENTY YEARS!?), this was wonderful. I loved it a lot. It made me incredibly emotional, not just sad, either.

But now, I see that it's been 9 months since this story was last updated. Will there no longer be a a third installment? I suppose I can die (mostly) happy knowing they are finally together again, and that they both love each other in the present. But I would love to read the third installment.
fireelfmaiden1 chapter 28 . 7/22
I just loved reading this. I am looking forward to reading Part3 when you get chance to post it. well done.
Guest chapter 28 . 7/11
I've been following this series for over a year, and I love it. Can't wait for an update!
ArtemisBlossom chapter 28 . 7/9
Oh man. Please tell me you haven't discontinued this series. I am SO looking forward to your next story.
TurbulenceAhead chapter 28 . 7/9
What an utter masterpiece. This might just be the best story I've read on this site in years! Your characterization, language, and mythology were beyond perfection. This is some professional work that honestly blows the canon Marvel Universe out of the water. You transitioned fluidly through Norse, Marvel, and original plot lines and good lord can you write some excellent action sequences. I applaud every word of these two stories!
I just stumbled on this series, and literally binged the whole thing in two days much to the dismay of my sleep pattern! I see it's been a good while since you finished this installment and I encourage you to begin Kingdom Come soon! Though I do totally understand giving yourself a break and allowing for some development time.
All my best!
~ Hailey
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26
I know you posted this story a year ago but I tend to read a lot of fanfiction and this is the most amazing story I've read! The emotions you dragged out of me were almost unbearable, but it's so worth it! I really would like to encourage you to try sending this in to Marvel! I think you have a very strong chance of having this become part of the films! It would work in perfectly! Please try as I would very much enjoy to see this produced, and for you to get the credit you so clearly deserve. :)
Allison chapter 28 . 6/25
I've been waiting for part 3 since October 2014...
it's now June of 2015...
a girl can only wait so long...
so get a move on...
pls
inperfection chapter 28 . 6/20
An excellent story I absolutely cannot wait to read series 3 :)
Ephemeral Stream chapter 28 . 5/11
Loved this dearly; the language was incredible, and the pain at their reunion was quite palpable.
Mandagal12 chapter 28 . 5/10
Fantastic story! I spent my weekend reading part 1 and 2. Normally, I hate the first person narrative but you write so well that I was hooked. I look forward to reading part 3. Any update on when that will be?
Spaceape chapter 28 . 4/30
This is unbelievably good! I thought you couldn't do any better than the original, and then, this sequel happens, wow!
I'm blown away! I hope you're still working on getting the next seque out! Can't wait to see it!
Till then!
InuGirl1028 chapter 28 . 3/18
I'm so excited to read Kingdom Come. This is literally my favorite story on this website. I do have a question though. Kingdom Come will be going into Thor: The Dark World, but they recently announced the news of Thor: Ragnarok and the Infinity War movies (which I'm guessing include Loki and Thanos in some way). Loki doesn't die at the end of the TTDW, so I guess my question is if you'll be continuing?
25travelbabe chapter 28 . 3/18
Oh my gosh I can't wait for the third installment. I love your story so far!
TheRealHawkeye chapter 28 . 3/15
I love this, and I can't wait for Kingdom Come!
Quick question: is Eirlys based off Sigyn?
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