Reviews for Liturgy of the Hours
AngelSlayer135 chapter 11 . 4/12
A fairly interesting story, and a very dark take on Naruto. I rather enjoy some of his manipulations, both the ones that he did and did not get away with.

There were a few confusing parts along the way but nothing too serious.

All in all a very interesting take on what Naruto would have been like if he had been more like Gaara.
Guest chapter 11 . 3/24
Cool story.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/24
if this was a "normal" fic with a "sane" mc i wouldve stopped reading at this chapter, but its not. I started reading this fic fully accepting that this mc has not been properly raised and has ended up quite insane. Sucks to read that it happens but fuck it, the mc is insane so its more.. i dont know how to really say it so i guess just "acceptable" to read it.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/24
Ahhh reading about psycho mcs is just.. fascinating.
WhistlesOfTin chapter 10 . 3/1
I'm so glad you didn't go the harem route. Harem stories are never GOOD stories. They're just cliched. This is a good, original story.
Idris2000 chapter 10 . 12/25/2015
MAGNIFICENT! AWESOME! EXCELLENT JOB!
demorarion chapter 11 . 11/4/2015
don't worry, i definetely looove your story...
warpterror chapter 5 . 9/25/2015
Hmm not so subtle there Naruto.
I felt like last chapter he was acting smarter than here. Maybe that's because Kurama was influencing him directly back then? Anyway It's more interesting to see him manipulate people than making them fear him...
Personally I don't have anything against Sakura like a lot of Naruto fans seem to, but just because I don't hate her character doesn't mean I like her. Hence why the way you had Naruto deal with her was enjoyable for me to read BECAUSE because she had no clue it was him and the way he earned her affection after that was the cherry on top. Now that he is showing a sociopathic side that seems to have been null and void. I guess I'll see how that goes...
WinchesterNimrod chapter 11 . 9/23/2015
This story broke my heart and made me happy. Your writing is very captivating.
WinchesterNimrod chapter 4 . 9/23/2015
this is literally amazing. You are a genius to write such a thing!
Quadredurudoubleslash2 chapter 11 . 9/6/2015
No this is the bad ending
Luizals chapter 11 . 6/24/2015
Wow, This was a trip. Seriously, so fucking twisted! I can't say it lovely but it was definitely amazing, in bad sort of good sort of awful way...?
It's a compliment, for reals.
Like when you watch Hannibal and you are scared to death and just a little (lot) disgusted but you still recommend it, refer to it as ingenuous and watch the next segment.
So, yeah...
The last chapter version that naruto plays the Fox just cracked me up, so fucking ironic.
Surprisingly the fish being boiled alive scene was the most shocking for me, truly horrible. Hope no one does that. ( if I'm not mistaken they do it to crabs or lobsters or something... THAT'S fucking awful!)
Guest chapter 11 . 6/23/2015
I liked both endings but of course I'm always sad when naruto has to die.
TheawesomeSaze chapter 3 . 4/29/2015
Disturbing ...:)
Chance le Rappeur chapter 11 . 4/14/2015
It was great, wish I could have seen le bad ending though.
Great read!
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