Reviews for A Man of Iron
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 4/30/2014
its always interesting to get a glimpse of the thought that goes into the writing, i cant wait to see how you do samwell, he might be more in his element in starks workshop/library then freezing on the wall
LittleNK chapter 8 . 4/30/2014
Now that I think about it Logan suits better with the Dothraki than the Captain. Good choice :D Can't wait for the next chapter.
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 4/30/2014
Brilliant writing, i demand to see more tyrion/tony chapters. shame that they will be on oposite sides of the game of thrones

nice to see benjen, hope he lives longer then in cannon

jon is about to have his world shattered, he'll make a good straight man to tony's wild humor
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 4/30/2014
good to see tony from his own eyes, for i moment i thought that tony had discovered uranium and was going to be horribly irradiated like curie and her fellow pioneers, but as it is i cant wait to see what you do with these sunstones
9TH chapter 8 . 4/30/2014
Isn't Logan just kill a woman anyway?
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
this fic is hilarious, tony is my favorite avenger for a reason, if its not already decided i hope arya tags along with tony, the idea of them bouncing jokes off one another puts a smile to my face

keep up the good work!
PsyckoSama chapter 8 . 4/29/2014
You're not obliged to add Steve Rogers in some form... you do realize that, right? ;p

Maybe a great hero of the age of legends who is found frozen in the very ice of a wall?
OMAC001 chapter 8 . 4/29/2014
Interesting choice! Can't wait to see how Tony survives his attackers!
ouellet222 chapter 8 . 4/29/2014
will you introduce more people from the marvel universe? another fantastic chapter! keep it up, you got talent!
Arkisenn chapter 8 . 4/29/2014
Wanna know the first words out of my mouth when I read that final line? "Nice, nice, nice". I LOVE the idea of Logan as Daenerys' bodyguard. I love that you included him and for reference, I'm NOT a big fan of Wolvie. I like him, but I'm not a diehard fan. He really does fit the Dothraki persona and I want to see what you do with him.

That being said, try to keep the number of Marvel characters to what you already have. What you have works and there is no longer a need for any more. You have characters for Westeros and now one to follow Daenerys. Anymore and you'll hurt your story. GoT has a butt load of characters as it is, adding more will slow down your pacing and give your readers too many people to follow/care about which will hurt your story considering it follows different characters' POV.
Agailius chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
Ahh, Wolverine. Even when a Marvel character is thrown into a back-peddaled, alternate civilization, he's still famous enough to show up.
Oh I am Slain chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
Hrm, I've always found Wolverine to be a bit of a silly character (See the Wolverine sketch called "Ex-Men: Wolverine" on Youtube). I agree with the need to find an excuse to check on Daenerys though.
Tregun chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
I was hesitant to read this. Then I read it today. I felt like slapping myself for missing out all this time.
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stonegnome1 chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
I hope this story does not become a confusing as the books. It was nice having one story line to follow. I wonder when they will interact.
nytlyt chapter 7 . 4/28/2014
I like your story, but something about this chapter seemed a little wrong to me. Perhaps it was the super quick kidnapping or the fact that the bandit brigade just blurted out their sponsor without prompting like a bad comic villain. I believe this story has a lot of potential, but its okay to spend more than a chapter on a important life changing event. I mean GRRM has been spending 4-5 books about Dany in Essos, in fact, she is still hanging out in Essos and despite having legitimate competition in many forms (don't want to spoil anything if you haven't read) she is still trying to get her shit together so don't feel pressured to make a event that important only one chapter,because you fear you would string it out too long and lose viewers. Remember the turtle and the hare, slow and steady won the race.
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