Reviews for A Man of Iron
SuperiorShortness chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
Wolverine!
KnightofLycaeus chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
Had a bit of a laugh when I realized the new character was Wolverine. A fitting person to be here and this portrayal is interesting so far.
icgcarlos chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
OK, this is my second review. Major typographical error, its Khal Drogo not Droga. Short chapters but content is good.

Adding Wolverine is treading close to the Marvel crossovers. As i said before, keep it to a minimum. Even though Tony is the main character, adding other Marvel characters that rarely appears on the Iron Man comics/movies will change the genre of this crossover.

If you are going to add more better move this to Marvel/ASOIAF crossovers.
Carnacki23 chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
I was surprised when you posted this chapter. I really had no clue as to how Dany was important to the story until Logan came out of nowhere. I'll just say that I'm the complete opposite of disappointed; well done. But this now begs the question, "who else?" I doubt the you could introduce Captain America without creating a convoluted mess of a plot hole, but I want to see more Marvel universe characters introduced into this story. Great job!
Hygieia chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
I've always liked Daenerys in canon and I pike ehat your doing with Logan. I'm looking forward to seeing how Tony will make the suit.
BullinaChinaShop chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
Oh my god yes! Making Wolverine Dothraki was a) a major twist that I did not see coming at all, and B) just an excellent character choice for interacting with Grey Worm and Daario Naharis should you ever get that far. I have literally no suggestions for how to make this chapter better, but the addition of the X-Men adds an entirely new dimension to the story. For example, you could have Mystique be Braavosi, or Sabretooth be one of the wildlings. Oh and I also had an idea about maybe adding Thor in by using sunstones to replace the lightning in mjolnir. Dude keep it up because I actually think is your best work running!
Kalaong chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
...heh heh heh...

Wolverine is always a great way to demonstrate to thugs that the bars on the cage are not to protect the tiger, and that they are not the tiger.
ouellet222 chapter 7 . 4/28/2014
this story is soooooooooooo well written, i shit you not! I can't wait for more!
Xersin chapter 7 . 4/21/2014
Awesome story! An original one too! :) Loved it!
Jouaint chapter 7 . 4/20/2014
Great chapter.
Oh I am Slain chapter 7 . 4/19/2014
Just wanted to mention that I really like how you've got a firm grasp on keeping Westeros "in character" with all of its politics and nasty, brutish lifestyle, yet Tony is in character too, as a brilliant, shining beacon who is starting to cut through all of the bullshit in this world.

Since this is Westeros, I know lots of bad things will happen, but I particularly look forward to seeing how Tony screws up everyone else's best laid plans and brings some of his trademark heroism into such a conspiracy/politics-laden world.
Oh I am Slain chapter 5 . 4/19/2014
This is a particularly good chapter; I like the insight into Tywin's mind, and the clever realism you're using.
BullinaChinaShop chapter 7 . 4/18/2014
This is just so much epic I cannot describe it. You seamlessly transfer the Marvel personality into a believable cast that fit right into the Westeros universe. Please keep writing this, and if you want to turn this into the sort of epic that this story truly could become, the readers on this site would thank you for it.
LittleNK chapter 7 . 4/17/2014
Dany new protector? Hmm, I have no idea. Captain America? Ah! Can't wait for the next chapter!
PsyckoSama chapter 7 . 4/17/2014
I take it that Lord Oaker is due for a bad day, among others.
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