Reviews for Moments
spk chapter 8 . 6/30
I absolutely LOVE the Mac/Keith scene here. Perfect "Mac" voice. ;)
spk chapter 5 . 6/30
I really like that you included Duncan at the end. :)
c.elder chapter 16 . 3/8
I like your quote from ! It's great.
c.elder chapter 8 . 3/8
I like the way you have developed Mac into a more forthright character, not afraid to express herself.
irma66 chapter 5 . 12/7/2014
This chapter is amazing and heartbreaking and lovely. I love how you've included everyone's perspectives and overlaid them at Lilly's grave. My favorite line was Mac's, "oh, I hope I'm there."
Now I have to go find a Kleenex before someone catches me crying.
ZC70 chapter 17 . 4/15/2014
Nice! More please.
azerjaban chapter 17 . 4/4/2014
Excellent Excellent stories. The voices are perfect. I love the Mac and Wallace scenes. I'm really hoping for a post/during Logan and Keith scene.

Great writing. Keep up the excellent work
RhianaStar chapter 17 . 4/4/2014
Dude! lol got to love it...
RhianaStar chapter 16 . 4/4/2014
How beautifully done, both moments... meeting both Lilly's. Its sweet though... Logan was already knowned to little Lilly... as he was Uncle Logan.
RhianaStar chapter 15 . 4/4/2014
I love that you have written both of their sides of this moment..
RhianaStar chapter 10 . 4/4/2014
Yay you have explained how she had his number and his photo after all these years... love it
RhianaStar chapter 9 . 4/4/2014
Oh that was sad... but so true to what was happening to both
RhianaStar chapter 8 . 4/4/2014
Yay Mac is on TeamLogan lol
RhianaStar chapter 7 . 4/4/2014
Loved it
RhianaStar chapter 5 . 4/4/2014
A beautiful chapter with everyone remembering in their own way
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