Reviews for The Deal
Hirami chapter 2 . 11/25/2015
heheh. :D very well done. I can totally see this happen (in my little prideshipping universe at least).
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Hadassa J chapter 2 . 8/10/2014
Wow, life IS good. This was amazing. Everything was so intense and in-character, and the dialogue was brilliant. I loved it :D
YamiNoIcexIcuo chapter 2 . 8/1/2014
I believe you're right, it basically writes itself, I love how you portrayed their love hate and the kinky stuff was welcome as well. All the emotions were realistic and believable. I'm not a hardcore pride shipper but this was pretty weird and nice and I enjoyed myself. Have an Icy Day!

-IcexIcuo
Trillian75 chapter 2 . 3/3/2014
This was pretty HOT. I hope you write more.