|Reviews for Uzumaki|
| MuRioDame chapter 27 . 3/21
Wow, did Ino just screwed up? Then again, at least Naruto won't be going alone if Satsuki went with him
Can't wait to see her face, though!
Anyway, good luck with life and happy writing!
| XxXSharingan-MaidenXxX chapter 27 . 3/20
I finally read everything and let me tell you, this fan fiction version story of Naruto with a female version of Sasuke is very, very, very interesting and perplexing. :3 The canon similarities are there yet the divergences are very obvious to me. I can definitely see why Naruto's canon path was deliberately ruined and why he's descending into darkness. Even Naruto himself in canon mentioned that if he didn't have certain people in his life who have proven themselves to be people who genuinely cared about him, he would've ended up like Gaara from the beginning. I do agree that Naruto does seem a lot more weaker than his canon counterpart in comparison, yet at the same time I can definitely see why as well. Those strengths had been transferred into Satsuki (Sasuke.) It really makes me wonder how Naruto will bounce back into the correct path now, but I do have assumptions. X)
What makes me even more surprised is that you actually managed to make me tolerate and actually like Sakura Haruno's character of in this canon's universe! I can definitely relate to her in the past with the whole remodel criteria she has with Satsuki.
I wonder how exactly Naruto and Satsuki will end up together?
I wonder how at this point Naruto's character will become stronger? How will all of this affect the next upcoming arcs?
I did enjoy everything and the character deaths never make break my will to continue on reading a good story, I will admit, however, that some more descriptions should've been included to give out more visionary. For example? I think you should've added more of the other side character's emotions and feelings in a lot of scenarios. During like the moment Hinata got fatefully wounded in her Chunin Exam, killed by Gaara? What about the other Rookies besides the main trio? The other members of Team Kurenai? Oh God, you should've included her whole team's reactions (Kiba, Shino, their teacher) besides Naruto's. It could've sent out more emotion to know what her team members are thinking from watching their ally go gone down in such a horrible way.
It's hard to imagine they'd keep quiet in the background, especially Kiba when it's Gaara Hinata was up against and not someone who was a little more on the sane side. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter~! Keep it up~!
| andre4108 chapter 15 . 3/18
Yeah I'm going to stop reading this...I mean how can you kill her off so easily? You're still great but this chapter left a bad taste in my mouth.
| thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 3/15
it seems like satsuki might be a wee bit jealous...
| thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 3/15
interesting use of character development, I wonder how this near death expereince will have affected their relationship?
| thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 3/15
you jump around a lot in this chapter, but cover interesting stuff nonetheless, oh, and mayo is just nasty
| thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 3/15
yay for teamwork!
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 3/14
yea, naruto probably has ptsd, but considering that the ninja academys are training child soldiers it was going to happen eventually
| thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 3/14
its a shame that naruto got that bit of hope only for it to be so cruelly torn asunder
| thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 3/14
I wonder if naruto also noticed the similarities, or if sasuke's just going to keep that tidbit quiet
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 3/14
interesting au, it should be cool to see how things develop
| Bibi chapter 27 . 3/2
I need a kiss of Naruto and satsuki.
| Blizzardfang chapter 27 . 3/1
I have to say I love the way you make naruto dad without taking away what make him a cool character. I'm curious to see how you continue to mould him.
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/27
Naruto: "this blood... Isn't mine?"
Author's note: How do you like you're toast?
I'm thinking we need a transition
| Kuroppy chapter 24 . 2/26
ooookaaaaay.. ano.. Is this where the plot falls apart?