Cool story. The mob angle was fun and I like the way you included different characters.

Love the story! I love Jay and Emma together. It was a good ending! It'd sure be awesome if you decided to continue the story though ;) lol

Orrrrrr it'd be great if you started finishing some of your other stories . I'm always begging for finishes on many of them ;)

I really did like the ending but it would be really cool if you continue from there or at least make a sequel.

I love the twist that you put on the story. I'm definitely go back and read the story over again. I want more of the story lol! You made us want more with the ending.

Yaaaaay! I may start over & read from the beginning now that it's all done. Loved the action it got my adrenaline pumping . It would be so awesome to actually have episodes/movies of some of these stories!

Loved the ending! Loved the whole story.

I love the twist at the end. Jay is a cop, that was awesome.

Ahhhh ended just when it was getting good . How did I not pick up any of the signs!? Lol oh well . im so glad you're updating

Wow! It's awesome that Jay was a cop the whole time. Great twist!

Love this . I know it's been a year but still hoping you'll update!

You should update. It's really good!

Please continue this story! I really enjoy it.

This is probably one of the best stories ive read on this whole site. Pretty please keep going with it. I'm completely hooked. :D Awesome job!

Can't wait to read more hope u update soon!