|Reviews for A Very Human Convention|
| Mighty Dreamfinder chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
This was an awesome read! You seem to have mastered everyone's individual character, and it all flows so well. Loved Optimus chiming in when everyone least expected it.
| Joshua S2-029 chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
By far the best Optimus father figure story I have read: especially considering the length. Even if you were not trying for that, well done.
| ravecrazeglitch chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
i don't have a middle name, nor do my sister and dad. we get reaction like that a lot.
| EHSparkwoman chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
Cute! I wonder who Arcee kissed... Tailgate or Cliffjumper or both!? (I'm sure I've read something by you before... but I can't for the life of me remember what it was... have you taken down any fics? Because it was probably one of them if so; I know I'd have faved it!) Anyway... Good Job!
| Alana-kittychan chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
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| Bluefeather4299 chapter 1 . 1/16/2015
Great chapter! I love this! It was HILARIOUS! Can't wait to read more...there IS more...right?
| Lady of the Shire chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
I liked how this story was paced! Personally, I thought "Patrick" was an appropriate middle name but "Arthur" could suffice. Personally, I would definitely enjoy reading an epilogue of Bumblebee fulfilling out his designated dare!
| entercleverpennamehere chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Love it :)
And I couldn't help but 'aww' at the thought of a young Bumblebee wishing everyone goodnight individually XD
| feelzyfeelz chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
OH MY FRAGGING PRIMUS! I just adore fatherly Optimus Prime! He seems like a good father for Jack with his biological dad MIA, AND HAS NO ONE SEEN THE PERCY JACKSON REFERENCE!? I'M SCREAMING RIGHT NOW! HOLY HADES!
| AcctClerk23 chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Cuuuuute and entirely enjoyable to read :)
| WritingMagic chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
"But he wouldn't trade their friendship for the Allspark itself." Aw, that was just...aw! :) Prime is sort of a fatherly figure, (and June, I think, does have a slight crush on him,) so him being the one to give Jack a good middle name is quite fitting.
...Ack, now this brings back the sadness I felt when Prime died in Predacons Rising...whyyyyyyyy
| DixieChicrules123 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
this is a very LOL story can you make more like this. Keep up the great work!
| mischeifPumpkin chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Ah, wow! You captured the sense of a sleepover really well. As soon as Raf mentioned Bumblebee's suggested "Lancelot," I totally cracked up. And again when they started giggling about it before they went to bed.
Optimus is just...ah, so great! I love the way you write him - like a father figure to the humans and bots alike. And the fact that he had actually been listening the whole time...heehee.
A definite favorite. :) Thanks for such a cute little fic!
| tfplover14 chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Aw, great story! Please continue it!