Reviews for Lust
antiquelilium chapter 1 . 8/25/2024
Beautiful and creative story for such a heavy topic
Heewonjay chapter 1 . 8/9/2024
This was amazing and beautiful. Comforting too! To think that this could be what waits for us at the end. To die suddenly or slowly but either way not alone. To have someone there to guide you and give you that last bit of peace before you leave. Thank you for this!
Crickett 1.0 chapter 1 . 2/13/2023
My heart is flying out of my c hest. So, so good.
Cknsw chapter 1 . 1/11/2023
Your creativity continues to astonish me. This is gentle but dramatic, soothing yet tearful.
beachblonde2244 chapter 1 . 1/8/2023
I still so love this one shot
Shazzeer chapter 1 . 1/21/2022
Yes yes and yes! Walking tougher side by side as death and forgiveness, releasing souls to the afterlife. I would go willingly if The one that releases me is Edward or Bella ;)
Scribner's2328 chapter 1 . 12/18/2020
Who would think that a story called "Lust" would make me cry? This was beautiful. Thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2020
This is such a beautiful story and one of your best. And I love all your stories. You are a very talented writer. I have reread this story many times and still cry at the end every time. Thanks for sharing for gift with us.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2019
So beautifully crafted and delivered. Thank you...again.
princeselisa chapter 1 . 7/12/2018
:)
Valya 001 chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
Wow...this was such a beautiful story...:-)
Atwiggs chapter 1 . 3/1/2018
Yay! That was beautiful! I had a feeling it was going to end with them both being together and giving the joy of a content death to others! I lost my husband on Jan 31, 2017 and I would be so happy if his end came like Bella’s did... I miss my Joel so much... Thx for writing!
sujari6 chapter 1 . 2/8/2018
Beautiful story.
TheUnderStudy chapter 1 . 2/6/2018
Just amazing! Wow! So glad I caught Lauren Vagabonda Reads' post about this one. It was the perfect way to end my work day. It makes me fear death a little less.
ChrisDGoosey chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
WOW! How did you manage to take this title/subject and deliver something so utterly beautiful and poetic. If you ever have to present a single piece that can show what you can do in 10,000 words - this is it! You are so very talented and I can't stop reading your work.
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