Reviews for Pride: The Original Deadly Sin
jlap.mypersonalfiles chapter 1 . 1/18/2021
That was wow!
vickyycullen chapter 1 . 1/20/2018
I wanted Edward to go to jail :( would've been a better ending
Ajfflady chapter 1 . 12/14/2017
Very dark and delicious. American Psycoesque via Christian Bale. Bella was his counterpart in a way. Poor Angela she got dicked over literally. Great work.
kneon chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
wow Isabella knew how to manipulate Edward for her gain. Great story.
KittyAsrai chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
I couldn't stop reading this I couldn't put it down such an awesome story. Love it! I like this confident and cocky Bella and Edward pairing
BridieM chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
You had me on edge the whole story. :D
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Great story!
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
With Bella by his side they are a very formidable and dangerous duo. Why in the world, since he is so danged brilliant, did he never think there would be cameras, especially since it was the top technology company? Even *I* knew there would be surveillance cameras everywhere.

Obviously Bella is the daughter of Charlie Swan but I thought she was a plant to catch Edward, not as an accomplice, so you fooled me on that one! At some point in time they will be caught. Who gets away with five murders in the same building, the same company and all within such a short time?!

Good story! I like ones that make me think. ;)
Jonesn chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
This was an awesome concept, Dazzled!
Just Sus chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
This was gruesomely awesome! Bella was a bit disturbed, but Edward was ruthless, and a killer to boot! I think he was a remorse for what he did to people!

I enjoyed this!

FluffyLiz chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
Brilliant story, loved it. You made Edward such an unremittingly ghastly character, but nevertheless managed to give him redemption, of sorts. Clever little short story.
Luna'sMomma chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Gothictemptress rec'd this story and I have to tell you how much I liked it. I wonder if she'll really be satisfied, but as it stands, I like the ending as is because her sick father is finally dead. I'm glad!
Hoodfabulous chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
I loved this one-shot. There's a soft spot in my heart for a bad, bad, boy, and I think Bella played him a little, which was GENIUS on her part.

I loved writing with you gals!

SLKerouac chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Edward is very determined to have Bella by his side in his climb up to the top. Newton was in his way and took care of that. The next was Aro which Edward took care of after Aro was blackmailing him for Bella. Aro wanted her but Edward was not going to let her go. Edward took care of him also. The Detective was not only after Edward now but he also saw that Isabella was working for Edward. There were threats made which Edward had no idea of what that was about. Bella told him her story about her life with her father who was the Detective. Edward now as taking care of that problem for himself but also for Bella. It was now just them. Interesting!
Reader-many chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Grat story ... even if thinking hot hot edwards is make feel kind of bad, but is the beauty of Fanfiction word isnt it? Thanks for sharring this story :)
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