Reviews for Not Always So Perfect
psionicPeaceful chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
(Hey, you wrote something! -brick'd)
Yipe! The Arwing On the Lawn gone wrong, huh? I enjoyed reading it. :D With a nudge from the genre you put this under, when the Arwing came up I immediately thought "Oh no, he's dead".
[His very visual brain is a double-edged sword here, as the same process that allows him to see his daydreams in such detail allots the same qualities to his nightmares.] Haha, very true!
This ended so abruptly that it's funny. A bit blunt coming after the paragraphs before, but I guess it puts the nail in the coffin about [the dreams of the dreamer] being crushed. It is a parody, after all X)
MaxFR68 chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Is this a oneshot or will Neils take on the role of Fox ?