|Reviews for Starclans Gift|
| WyldClaw chapter 4 . 7/5/2018
owlpaw's right not to trust hawkfrost
| The author chapter 7 . 6/28/2015
I'm too lazy to sign in. :/ but looking back, it sounds like a freaking two year old scribbled random words into a page. The sentence flow is of, words are overused. This is a poor example of my current writing skills.
| Secret chapter 7 . 9/17/2014
Awesome story! Is it ok if I use MagicClan and CloudClan in my story? I'll give you credit if you say yes.
| Amberflame805 chapter 7 . 5/14/2014
I really like it!
I suggest a cliffhanger.
Anyways, update soon!
| Amberflame805 chapter 6 . 5/14/2014
Okay, I'm favoriting.
| Amberflame805 chapter 5 . 5/14/2014
I like the cliffhanger.
This is good, and somehow I'm sure that's what Hawkfrost would do.
| Amberflame805 chapter 4 . 5/14/2014
I don't think that a clan would be so accepting of a stranger...
Otherwise it was great!
| Amberflame805 chapter 2 . 5/14/2014
I like it.
I suggest that you use paragraphs, otherwise it is great
| Thunderstar of shadowclan chapter 7 . 3/21/2014
love the warrior names! your writing is amazing! (a little tip, consider putting thoughts in italics, it helps people understand it better) read my story?
| Cyanide and Cuteness chapter 7 . 3/19/2014
Amazing! And I really do like the names...
| Cyanide and Cuteness chapter 6 . 3/19/2014
| Cyanide and Cuteness chapter 5 . 3/19/2014
Oh... Cool ;)
| Cyanide and Cuteness chapter 4 . 3/19/2014
| Cyanide and Cuteness chapter 3 . 3/19/2014
Yay! THis chappie is great, and there were like- no grammar issues!
| Cyanide and Cuteness chapter 2 . 3/19/2014
Uh... I really like this, but you need to separate the lines, every thing is just one big paragraph making it harder to read. Everything else is fine, but you should double or triple proofread your document.
BY the way, can you please read my story The Beginning and review in it? You don't have to if you don't want to.