Wonderful story. Great job with characterizing Elsa and Hiccup. They really seemed like well thought out characters with complex emotions. That's always the hardest part to nail in a story. Anyway, great job and keep up the good work.

Did Astrid died or break up with Hiccup? Because I'm wondering why he's so hostile/passive aggressive with Elsa

Sir i will hunt you in your dreams if there's no sequel

This whole chapter, pute fucking gold, except for the very last line. This whole chapter, both of them have been going at each other with full killing intent, each barely doing killing blows from the other, also, even after hostilities cease, should still be too on edge to laugh at hiccup getting cuffed by toothless. I know you were trying to break the tension, but you went too far. Her laughing in a situation like that makes it seem like that whole fight they had meant nothing, and I don't think that was your intention.

Thank you for writing this story of one of my favorite ships. High writing quality and enchanting plot line with realistic characters. Many many thanks again for finishing this fanfic. I enjoyed all the ride. Ending left me teary and joyful and wondering of everything what is going to happen after. Much love, Blue.

I'm startled by just how much I loved every part of your story. Thank you.

Welp, I was wrong. A nice story but somehow unsatisfying in the end. I was looking forward to reading about Elsa going up north to see the dragons but I guess her allusion of doing something crazy makes is a decent place to stop. Cheers

Omg, kiss already ffs. It's driving me mad watching them dance about one another like this.

Calling Ernie as the bad guy from here

to y'all thinking about Astrid simply don't...

This was great!

Thank you for writing this story. It's something I stumbled on out of chance, but I am incredibly happy I did. I liked the characters a lot, and the premise was interesting. The nitpicks were far and in between, and I kept just wanting more content. Getting to the end hurt me lol, but I am glad you had an ending you're happy with. Should you ever write a sequel, know that you will have me as a very interested reader always.

was this written before the second movie came out? or was it the third that told what happened to hiccups mom? I don't remember but I wonder if it will be addressed in this fic

While I appreciate Ruffnut trying to help, there's a bit of a false equivalency there. For one, people process grief differently.

Two, this wasn't about Hiccup moping around, but being reasonably unsure if he was projecting his love for Astrid onto Elsa. He was right, she can't understand, because she's not in any danger of entering a relationship with the monarch of a foreign land because said monarch reminds her of her twin brother.

It's a VERY specific scenario and isn't the same as just not moving on from a loss.

She lost a limb? Bruv are you serious rn?! Even Hiccup barely did jack shit, honestly what did he even do? What did toothless even do? Like I'm astonished you didn't even add him in the final battle with the main villain. Elsa wouldn't have been injured if he and toothless were there, feels forced, like you're crippling her because he's a cripple. Hence since they are a couple, they should be a crippled couple. Also the fact that the three way war in the archipelago was completely forgotten. And also I agree with most people, alot of what happened was unnecessary but other than that props to you finishing it I guess.