|Reviews for Ticklish|
| Fraulein Takoor chapter 1 . 1/19/2015
| Sarah chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Perfect end to this sweet scene. Oliver's annoyance with Roy is cute too.
| Janna18 chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Love the end! Adorable!
| XxXSmiles101XxX chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Haha funny and cute. Well done :)
| SassyReaderGirl chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
How wonderful. They are so cute together!
| heartstremble chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
I read this when you first posted it but was on the train so I couldn't review and then I forgot about it. Now I have the time to read it again and sldkjgkajfas still effing cute the second time around.
The opening line just had me smiling already. And the fact that Oliver's denying it even being called 'ticklish' because god forbid it sounds silly and weak? Typical. (But adorable because he knows she has him; he knows she knows his body too.) And she's so sneaky in using a distraction to prove her point!
"She wriggles in place to adjust their legs so she's more comfortable, and he nearly groans at the contact, their chests brushing, hips aligning as if they have a mind of their own."
- Sa-woon! Equal parts sexy and lovely. I really love this image, and the one about Oliver showing with her body wash in the mornings sometimes. It's just so domesticated and beautiful. I can imagine him going on about his day then he lifts his hand to scratch his nose and smells the vanilla on him and he just stands there with a goofy little smile on his face until someone snaps him out of it.
"He kisses her again before he does something stupid like tell her he loves her."
- It's not stupid. Tell her. Do it. Dooo iiitttt.
"as if reassuring herself that he can touch her all he wants"
- Do you mean "reassuring *himself?"
(Oh yeah, it's me Selena in case you didn't get the memo that I changed usernames across all media boards.)
| thereluctantwriter chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Very cute. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
So flipping cute!
| an-extraordinary-muse chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Sorry it took me so long to get over here and review! :-) Well, I just love this, as usual. You write some of the best fluffy moments for these two, let me tell ya. Firstly, I love this line, "... to dance at the pointed angle of his hip-". There's something so ... I dunno, it just sounds lovely in my head, and when I read it aloud. I really like it.
Secondly, Felicity wondering if Roy is ticklish? That's great! Such an off the wall question, out of the blue ... and now I want to know if Roy is ticklish. Or Oliver. I can just imagine Roy's expression if Felicity asked him - I'd laugh my butt off.
Lastly, I really love that you pointed out that Felicity knew Oliver was ticklish even though he didn't. Because it's one of those things you think, who would notice that? Felicity, of course! And then, that last line - ugh, loved it! Perfect way to end the story (and a perfect line)! Another great job. :)
| JLC chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Lovely piece of writing.
| SecondSadie chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
SO. CUTE. GAH. As usual, I love every moment of this- I couldn't stop smiling as I read it! I've said this before and I'll say it again- your stories featuring Oliver and Felicity in everyday moments of domestic bliss are my favorite things to read because you write them so well!
Felicity being curious about whether Roy is ticklish or not because of the mirakuru is so spot on because of course Felicity would wonder about something like that, and I totally don't blame Oliver for getting upset that she's thinking about Roy while they're in bed together- love it!
But the best part? That Felicity knows something about Oliver that he doesn't even know, because she loves him! Which is why my heart broke a little at the last line: "before he does something stupid like tell her he loves her." And this is what was going through my head: "That's not stupid! Tell her that you love her!" So now I'm hoping for a story from you about the first time that he does tell her that he loves her! (unless you already wrote that, and I completely missed it… I hope I didn't miss it…)
In conclusion: fantastic story! Great job as always, and I look forward to whatever you write next! :)
| AtLoLevad chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
This was perfect! You write them so well!
| Gerci chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
great story super cute:)
maybe you can do a sequel of felicity actually asking Roy and olivers reaction
anyway great chapter
| MysteriousTwinkie chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
That was adorable. :D