Reviews for Unbelievers
MonMonCandie chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Wow, this was fun to read! I really liked it! :D The antics of Volkner and Flint never ceases to amaze me and the way you wrote Flint was just spot on! I absolutely love his relationship with Volkner. xD Clever idea of implementing Hilda and "Black" here too! I was a little confused at first with why you were calling Hilbert "Black", but then it totally made sense as I continued reading. That was smart! The ending really hit home though. I bet'cha Cheren's going to have questions for Volkner later, but I really liked that way you ended this one-shot. :)

This was very well written and I honestly don't mind the length. It gave a lot of ground to build up the characters right up until the end. Great job!