|Reviews for Unbelievers|
| Zinthia chapter 1 . 10/27/2017
is so fun and interesting to read. Never thoght that Volkner and Flint would be in the battle subway, and battling hilda and Black and White. name thingy is clever and creative per interaction between both Flint and Volkner and Hilda and Hilbert is cute tbh. and yeah . nice content
| MonMonCandie chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Wow, this was fun to read! I really liked it! :D The antics of Volkner and Flint never ceases to amaze me and the way you wrote Flint was just spot on! I absolutely love his relationship with Volkner. xD Clever idea of implementing Hilda and "Black" here too! I was a little confused at first with why you were calling Hilbert "Black", but then it totally made sense as I continued reading. That was smart! The ending really hit home though. I bet'cha Cheren's going to have questions for Volkner later, but I really liked that way you ended this one-shot. :)
This was very well written and I honestly don't mind the length. It gave a lot of ground to build up the characters right up until the end. Great job!