|Reviews for High School Maelstrom|
| fenixrojo36 chapter 2 . 9/24
Sigue con la publicación de esta historia está excelente yo te sigo apoyando no hagas esperar actualizala cada mes o quincena no abandones esta historia continuala por favor me gusta mucho la historia
| fenixrojo36 chapter 1 . 9/24
Sigue con la publicación de esta historia
| fenixrojo36 chapter 9 . 9/24
Sigue con la publicación de esta historia está excelente
| rankoon300 chapter 1 . 8/28
Not to be mean but I can't read this anymore. Just can't...
| scaryorange chapter 1 . 7/24
why is naruto weak? he's supposed to be godlike after killing Madara (literally is given chakra from a god)
| CannedMushroom chapter 9 . 7/7
Damn shame this sits abandoned. It is easily the best Naruto/DxD story.
Just another example of why authors need to stay focused instead of jumping to other ideas. RIP
| Jonny Walker chapter 4 . 7/2
rias is a plain little and doesn't hesitet doing anything to get a peerage
| BJW chapter 9 . 6/25
When are you gonna continue this?
| surc chapter 9 . 6/25
that omake was disgusting. the story itself is good, and I like it. I am disappointed that you have stopped releasing new chapters.
| blazenite104 chapter 5 . 6/15
I feel like someone needs to turn narutos talks around. he screams Kiba being selfish, but someone kiba should have pointed out naruto does the same. when rescuing asia he said if he couldn't look himself in the mirror just points out asia had nothing to do with it. it was his selfishness that he couldn't let it go. concern for himself in that moment.
| blazenite104 chapter 4 . 6/15
actually of all things going on here, the only thing that irks me in any way is that naruto gets away with disobedience. no matter how friendly they are in the end it is still a master servant situation. the fact that he can undermine her authority and get away with it sends a bad message. she may not exert her authority much and that is a good thing, however when she does if he does not obey he needs some form of punishment. in the leaf village he was punished for his actions and were it not for tsunades personal kindness he likely would not have remained a shinobi due to his actions against her on a number of occasions. anyone else may have been 'removed'.
| SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 9 . 6/14
Awesome hope you continue
| den123456 chapter 7 . 6/8
This story's improved so much since the 4th chapter! So many hilarious moment in this one
| den123456 chapter 4 . 6/8
This chapter is disappointing. Your characters are really straight laced and you don't write them in an interesting way, by which I mean none of them really have any fun quirks that make them interesting to follow. Naruto in particular seemed to become this really flat and formal speaking white knight during the church rescue.
The interaction between the characters is also fairly boring and somewhat emotionless, for example: you say that Kiba and Naruto are close friends but you've failed to actually show this in their interactions at all, and even the way Naruto is scared of Akeno doesn't come off as all that funny.
These problems are mostly due to your writing style, which aside glaring issues with grammar and your inability to properly use verbal tenses also doesn't convey emotion well. Their dialogue is robotic and emotionless at times.
In all its one of the many unoriginal "put Naruto in another hero's place without changing the plot at all" fics, and it doesn't have the benefit of having a distinctive and interesting writing style.
| den123456 chapter 3 . 6/8
Your inability to use the proper tense really drags the story down.