Looking forward to Chapter 10.

Update it bro

Hey, retard, stop switching tenses, retard.

I doubt you pay attention to this story anymore. I don't know if you still read ff but i wanted to argue your logic about Sona anyway. (shrug) I like debating. the deal was she 3 peoplerias only got Issei. yes devil's are greedy, 7 sins, blah blah. however 1 side can not unilaterally change an agreement. especially after they've already gotten what they want out of it. not even a devil. if it was all on the up and up she would of discussed it with rias before doing anything. not after the fact. she didn't even have the courage to tell rias immediately after. instead she waited until the next day then called rias into her office like work for her rather than co-rulers. I don't like rias much if at all but i like crooks and cheaters even less. I like cowardly ones least of all. peace.

i really liked this story and your overview.

Honestly feel like Sona is a massive bitch here. She's supposed to be friends with Rias, right? Does she want her friend to get married off to some jackass and get raped on her wedding night? And if Rias passed up three potential peerage candidates for Sona and then cashed them all in as a favour to let her have Issei, then it's no business of Sona's how long or what method Rias uses to get Issei, since Sona already gave up all rights to him.

We can use food as a metaphor. Imagine there are 3 cookies and a cake. Rias lets Sona have the cookies in exchange for letting Rias have the cake. Rias is starving to death and will last an unknown amount of days without food, so she needs to eat the cake soon (the deadline for the rating game with Riser). The cake will also go stale in 7 days (the amount of time till Issei graduates). However, Rias doesn't have a fork to eat the cake with (a method to get him to join the peerage) yet, so she decides to wait before eating it. But, on the 5th day, Sona takes the cake and eats it herself. She says "You've had all this time to eat the cake and still haven't gotten a fork to eat it with, so I'm not going to restrain myself. It's your own fault for putting it off too long!"

See how bullshit that logic is? Sona is blatantly going back on the deal and doesn't even seem to care about how badly Rias needed it.

There is like 15 ways to beat a phenex lol

Ravel is basically a side character. You made her a bit more interesting but still a side character. She is not really that important.

A fairy? Really

You say he’s weak but he has more experience than all of them combined and then multiplyed. Even weakened he can probably defeat them rather easily.

With the whole Lady of the Lake stuff i can see some conflict happening between Naruto and Kiba.

Pretty sure Lord Gremory is named Zeoticus.

Diodora didn’t kill a father. He wouldn’t want to risk it. He wanted to get Asia in trouble for healing the enemy, an unholy being, a being of “pure evil”, so that he can mindfuck and fuck her until she breaks and becomes apart of his nun fetish harem.

I am physically repulsed by how much you missed in the Naruto lore. Where is Hagoromo and Homura dealing Kaguya because she wishes to return all chakra to her? She is an alien sent to the planet earth that betrayed and gave grace injuries to either Isshiki or Jigen. Members of the Ōtsutsuki clan travel through dimensions in search of God Trees so that they can harvest these fruits and gain their powerful chakra for themselves, producing medicine that grants them their godlike power along with extended youth and longevity. Some Ōtsutsuki, such as Momoshiki and Kinshiki, harvest the God Tree's fruit until it and its respective planet die, at which point they go looking for a new one. Kaguya, after consuming the fruit of Earth's God Tree, chose to settle on the planet and use the power she gained in order to single-handedly rule over the human populations. As a measure to keep the peace, Kaguya enslaved parts of the human population with the Infinite Tsukuyomi and bound those affected to the God Tree, assimilating them with its life force and gradually turning them into White Zetsu by draining them of everything that gave them their individuality, even their physical appearance. When Kaguya's sons, Hagoromo and Hamura, were born with chakra of their own, she merged with the Earth's God Tree in order to take the chakra back, thus becoming a monster called the Ten-Tails. If all of the chakra in the world is united with the God Tree once more, it would be able to bear a new chakra fruit. According to Amado, the Ōtsutsuki are the actual sources of the trees, seeding planets with juvenile Ten-Tails, which grow into the trees, sucking up the life of the planets. The resulting chakra fruit contains the energy and biological information of the planet, which the Ōtsutsuki use to update and evolve their species. A millennium ago, Kaguya and Isshiki were both sent to cultivate a God Tree on the planet Earth and harvest its Chakra Fruit, with which she was to provide for the main family of her clan from another world. According to Amado, Kaguya was a low-ranking member of the clan chosen as a sacrifice to the Ten-Tails, which would nurture the development of the God Tree. Instead, Kaguya desired the chakra fruit herself; betraying Isshiki in the process and leaving him for dead. In the anime, Kaguya was discovered by the people of the Land of Ancestors during an arrival to Earth, who brought her before their emperor Tenji. Identifying herself as the God Tree's guardian, Kaguya used her abilities to wipe Tenji's memories of the encounter and subsequently settled among his people, becoming recognised as his concubine. Living among humans, she slowly developed an attachment for the planet she meant to destroy. Growing closer with the emperor, she eventually fell pregnant. When the Land of That began to threaten the Land of Ancestors over a border dispute, Tenji attempted to prevent the outbreak of war by declaring that anyone who attacked the larger nation's representatives was to be executed, an order which she broke when she was threatened by them, resulting in her and her assistant Aino becoming hunted by their land to be executed. Losing all faith in humanity but still longing for peace, Kaguya believed that it was necessary for her to attain god-like powers in order to put an end to all of humanity's conflicts. So, despite her clan waiting to harvest that world of its God Tree, she defied the taboo surrounding the fruit and ate it. In doing so, she awakened the Rinne Sharingan and became the sole person on the planet endowed with chakra. Using her new-found power, Kaguya single-handedly ended the wars, and took control of the nations. For her deed of stopping the conflict, she received the blessing of the people and was worshipped as the Rabbit Goddess (卯の女神, Usagi no Megami). After establishing peace and changing somehow, Kaguya used the Infinite Tsukuyomi on humans to transform them into an army of White Zetsu over the course of many years in fear of her clan returning to take her chakra away. In the anime, not wanting mankind to perish, she freed some victims of the genjutsu and erased their memories. Assuming the Ten-Tails was an incarnation of the God Tree that attacked them to recover the chakra from its stolen fruit, Hagoromo and Hamura sealed the beast's chakra within the former's body while using its husk as the core of Six Paths — Chibaku Tensei, creating a celestial body that would become known as the Moon. Hamura later took leadership of the Ōtsutsuki clan and departed to the moon to guard the beast's remains, while Hagoromo remained on Earth in order to spread chakra to humanity and teach them the concept of ninshū. However, just before her sons could completely seal her, Kaguya had manifested her will in the form of an artificial human called Black Zetsu. With the agenda of reviving its "mother", Black Zetsu manipulated Hagoromo's eldest son, Indra, as well as his descendants within the Uchiha clan and his brother's descendants within the Senju clan in an attempt to get one of them to awaken the Rinnegan and break the seal. Madara Uchiha would eventually succeed in obtaining the Rinnegan, and Black Zetsu began secretly manipulating world events to have Kaguya revived. Also, any Yo-Kai can use Senjutsu, not just Nekoshou, and anyone can use Touki if they try hard enough, for example, Sairorg Bael.

this makes no sense
kaguya was stronger than hagoromo and the juubi is not a promidial god