Reviews for Mind the Sharp Edges
flanduslover1 chapter 39 . 8/24
I love this I haven't read one like this! Need more omg I can only imagine once he's finally takes Bella without a condom and (if)...big please she gets preggers his reaction
bluegirl27262 chapter 39 . 5/10
I really lime this story... it has everything that you want in a romance sex story... i hope you come back to it...
JasperYuSexyBeast chapter 39 . 10/1/2017
I didn't think this story is trash. I like your Jasper, he is very, how shall I say... arousing in a psychotic, sexy serial killer type of way. I love a confident Jasper who doesn't give a fuck. I get tired of woe is me I'm the God of War but I'm a pussy Jasper. Please I hope you decide to come back to this. Pretty please.
Kushka chapter 39 . 9/17/2017
Great story
Tommy14 chapter 39 . 9/15/2017
I love this story and it's dry humor. I enjoyed watching Jasper reactions and his thoughts..still so deadly and kickass. So interesting to watch this Bella who's personality is different from canon..love their teasing back and forth. The Cullens are different too..I wonder if that's due to not having The God of War as part of their "Family". I was smiling as Jasper interacted with them..especially amusing in a dark way as he scrambles Edwards brain so he can't think straight for hours..it also show Jasper's knowledge of war and fighting in that he knows exactly how long it will take for Edward to recover. Your Jasper is unique and memorable. Thank you for posting this story.
angelaroberts202 chapter 24 . 3/20/2017
The chapters seem to be getting shorter
angelaroberts202 chapter 23 . 3/20/2017
Steamy
angelaroberts202 chapter 20 . 3/20/2017
It's weird seeing carlise being afraid of Jasper
angelaroberts202 chapter 15 . 3/20/2017
He does look better without a shirt
angelaroberts202 chapter 13 . 3/20/2017
I never feel sorry for Edward tbh
angelaroberts202 chapter 3 . 3/20/2017
Lol giving a (creepy) stranger her number? Yeah that's sooooo smart
angelaroberts202 chapter 2 . 3/20/2017
Lol the albino comment was stupid af. How can he be albino when he's already a white guy? It's obvious to tell the difference between a white person and an albino because every race has distinctive features. That's what makes is weird seeing an albino because they have white skin, yet have features belonging to a race of people with melanin. Maybe Bella was just grasping for straws
angelaroberts202 chapter 1 . 3/20/2017
Oooh! So interesting already!
jeoliverio chapter 39 . 1/13/2017
I liked the story
Guest chapter 39 . 1/5/2017
Thank god you realised that this story is trash.
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