Reviews for Smooth Criminal
Springtrap chapter 15 . 8/11
Come on dude or girl it's been a year are you gonna update this story yet I really want to read the rest of it please please!?
wenkan chapter 15 . 8/6
OMG SO GOOD SO GOOD #DYINGSOHARDOMG ARGH I NEEED TO KNOOOOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXTTTT AHHH!

please keep it up! you've got an incredible story right here! . and thank you for sharing such an amazing tale _
ElsaXgirl chapter 15 . 2/4
Plz update I love this!
FrozenFan2 chapter 1 . 1/26
Please update soon I just love this
FrozenFan2 chapter 14 . 1/22
Update soon I love this story :)
aguiltyconscience chapter 15 . 1/11
I seriously love this, and I can't wait to see what happens:)
CanITellUSmThin chapter 15 . 1/7
Woow... this is amazing!

But what has happened? D: There's been no updates and that concerns me... :(
FreelanceBum chapter 15 . 12/27/2014
Once a week updates eh? lol

Hope you find your muse.
FreelanceBum chapter 8 . 12/27/2014
Putting Who Framed Roger Rabbit into this just blew my mind.
FrozenFan2 chapter 15 . 12/1/2014
Please update soon! :)
Guest chapter 15 . 11/10/2014
Anyone who's a murderous criminal should die...
MathiasRc chapter 15 . 10/31/2014
Why?! plssss update soon! :c
ElsaMaureenElphaba chapter 15 . 8/17/2014
I'm so Glad how this episode ended. I can not wait for the next One :D
Guest chapter 15 . 7/14/2014
Hello! I'm not great with criticism so I apologize in advance. I've read a handful of the Elsanna fanfics so far, I just want you to know yours is in my top 3 :) Your writing style is nice, every now and then you have a typo, but no glaring grammatical mistakes. I do hope you keep writing, the story is developing at a good pace. Sorry if this was more praise than useful review
Eira Wolfsdottir chapter 15 . 7/10/2014
Ohmergewd I could read this endlessly! u

Awesome bro. Cannot wait for update :D
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