"'I am Dyslexic of Borg, resistance is futile, you will be ass-laminated'," Ayuiij crowed.

Best line ever.

Oh, I know this is almost a decade old, and perhaps you haven't logged on in just as long, but I still wanted to review and say I really enjoyed reading this!

Too bad it leaves off on a cliffhanger!

*sniffs* No updates?
Please update again soon!

I want more. This chapter was good. Less confusing than the last one. I'm intrigued. I look forward to chapter five. Especially because now there is more blue and sparkly.

Well, good deal. One question, though: To what extent is suspension of belief used? I'm having a difficult time understanding the time frame in which this story is taking place-not so much in the individual chapters as in the storyline as a whole. As in, how much time has passed from the first chapter until now, or even in between each chapter? But, anyway, keep writing!

I like it! I hope you update more often! :D

This chapter was very amusing, even if it did leave me wondering what happened, and oh, so very confused. I like me! I also like all your other characters. Especially Sayel, who is indeed Obscure and Philosophical. Keep writing!

Please keep going. Your story reminds me of my friends and I, though it was a long time ago. I really miss being that young.

Sounds interesting...I'd like to see what happens next.

All I have to say is, "I desire with an eternal desire to glow with a light not my own."

But, that's not really all. Let's see, 1) "Akira doesn't sleep." I had to look at the clock and laugh when I read that. You don't even want to know at what obscene hour I'm writing this. (try 3:46, and not on the p.m. side) What can I say? You obviously know your friends. The "New Multiple Personality Disorder" was great and true to life. I have to ask if that was truly yours or Yoshi and Kali's. And the background you concocted for Kali was great 'cause I could really see her like that. I have many things to say, but I can just tell you. Bye : )

Heee! I am flamboyant! Very good, SeefSeef. You should really seperate your ANs and such from your story though.

I'm getting more and more impressed by your writing abilities with every sentence. You have a wonderful way with words - and I absolutely adore your Vulcans, they're spot on. "Before we degenerated into the conceptual world of ‘itna’" had me laughing out loud. :-D

There is a third chapter coming soon, right? ;-) (Says shee who updates about once a decade...)

Serri, I tried to send you an email but got a bad delivery message. Please email me! I have an opportunity for you to write and improve your writing talents!

Oh, and I really like what I've read thus far. You are an excellent writer!

Fun stuff. I like Lael, and Siyana, and Sayel, and Elora. Don't we have cool friends? Interesting seeing people in a different context or with a part of their character more exaggerated. Anyways, well-written, as usual. Great Dialogue. Right on about the self-worth stuff. And an interesting possible plot development? As you are reading this, consider yourself officially harassed about getting the next chapter(or few chapters) out. It's not like you have anything else to do : ).

Oh, yeah. If I were Captain Picard listening to Elora explain her faith, I would have thought that it was a cult, too. But I'm sure you have some plot ideas dealing with that. Yay Word! Alrighty then. Bye now. : )

To reiterate - YAY SEEFA! I liked this loads, even if it did get a little long and convoluted (sp?). Oh yeah, and please make sure to HURRY UP AND TYPE CHAPTER 3 ALREADY! How many freaking times do I have to yell at you for it? Garg! Meep! Sternum!