Tellarites. To quote Sarek, they don't argue for reasons - they simply argue.

Why haven't I read this before? This is one of the best pieces I've read in a long time! You'll continue it, right? Pretty please? With sugar on it?

yay. very cool. mais, qui est Jori?

I found this very good and hope to see more of this story. Please keep writing.

Tom Hudspeth

I thought this story was amazing, it made me laugh so much, i would really like to see this story progress muchly, it you know what I mean.

I thouoghly enjoyed the Andorians evil laughing sessions. But just to summ it up, i like your work.

Sighned

hexagon

Great story! You must continue it!

YAY SEEFA!

Me like much! _ I'm going to go change my author name to Ayuiij now.

Much happiness. And violence. Yay! I'm blue and sparlky

Lovely. For future reference, you might try using "paragraphs." By the way, I very much appreciated all the stuff about Ayuiij threatening to eat people.

Um, Seretha. I haven't even read the story yet, but I hope you realize it's one long paragraph. That's not going to be very easy to read. My suggestion, just type it as a regular Word document and then later save it as html. It's a lot easier and you don't have to worry about putting in all those tags and all that. Believe me, then it might actually be readable, but I'll try to muddle through. Cathy has the same problem because she hates Word. All i have to say to her is Tee Hee. Well, I think my review is long enough and probably longer than some people's stories, referring of course to you know who-STAR! But anyway, if this is the only review, that's why.