Harry is at least has additional 15 years of mental development and has behavior of a mature adult it's ridiculous.

Huh...I don't think I've ever seen a HP fanfic with Sally-Anne as a main character before, unless it was about her "mysterious disappearance". And certainly not one with Harry in the same train car. It feel a little bit weird, bit certainly also a breath of fresh air :D

"reinforced magic"? nah, it's trash. harry potter and nanoha? total nonsence. characters r flat as pancakes, plot's all over the place, and the dialouge's like a bad soap opera. author needs a reality check, like fuckin now.

I enjoy the story, and Ive read it before but this just hit me. He went from getting acid poured on his face one minute, to literally one minute later he’s talking just fine, as if nothing happened?

What about Smendrig ? He cast a unicorn to human transformation before.

I Love It!

So, we're just skipping over all of the fallout from Dudley attempting to murder Harry? Really? This isn't something that would be brushed over by teachers saying he's making something up. This is a police matter, and the hospital would be required to inform them. Realism went out the window with the first sentence of this chapter.

Also, the "Oh" this, "You see" that, "To be honest" the other is a very annoying writing technique. It's the author both speaking directly to and condescending to the readers, and makes me very disinterested in continuing to read this story. That, combined with the frankly random POV shifts.

This could be a good story, but it needs some editing to focus on the basics of storytelling. As is, it feels like it was written by a mid-teen just trying out writing.

OK, the Harry and Reinforce thing is interesting. The ludicrous flanderization of the Dursleys is just dumb. Dudley's a bully, not a murderer, and intentionally pouring acid on someone is far, FAR beyond anything even he'd do. The scar bursting is oh-so-convenient, with consequences that may be interesting, corny, or both depending on how they're treated going forward.

And the scar is on Harry's forehead, on the front of his head. Temples are on the sides of the head just above the ears, so that's NOT where his scar is.

course the asian wand is good with numbers lmao.

its so much cannon rehash it hurts, even the crossover part is nothing but boring snide comments herr and there

Wait... in book 3 will fawks become #4?

At this point in the story anyway

How does it come out as being specifically regretting Lilly's death? For all Harry knows, he could mean James

Like, harry got burned by acid, and then some random chick falls from the sky... And he's magically five with that? Way too weird

How the fuck is harry so calm right now? If it was me, I'd be freaked out