Reviews for Reinforced Magic
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 17 . 3/19/2015
kinda sucks that his Familiars use his Reserves (i suppose you did that to nerf him)... especially the Unicorn who seems like she should have her own being a Magical creature and all

well anyways, nice chapter
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 14 . 3/19/2015
you know the whole he's only 11 makes no sense right? Nanoha, Fate and Hayate where 9
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 12 . 3/19/2015
considering all the hype you have put on Harry having monstrous Mana Reserves the style so far seems, well crap... it seems like a waste of his raw power and pointless

honestly with all the knowledge that Rein has of Nanoha, Fate and Hayate it would have been nice to see him combine the 3 of there style's into one truly devastating style

ok, so Harry could be a "lifeless clone" who was in essence given a soul/true life by Tommy
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 11 . 3/19/2015
hmm, so its like a very very basic Tomb of the Night Sky... very handy but it needs protections on it and tied to his blood so that no one else can access it, especially since Rein will be putting all her knowledge into it
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 10 . 3/19/2015
why does he not learn Starlight Breaker? that would be much more useful against Trolls and such than Binding's

with Binding's they may work but its still a threat as there is no telling how long it will hold them, while Starlight Breaker or Divine Buster will just eliminate the threat

though i guess he would need a Device to use them but he should be able to use the more powerful spells while in Unison

oh and i guess Rein is trying to make a knock off Device...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 3/19/2015
hmm, shouldn't Harry be aware that Dumble's tried to probe his mind? also, for someone who is supposed to be secretive he sure uses Belkan magic alot with others around
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 7 . 3/19/2015
yea, that was rather stupid of Harry to use Belka magic... i really dont see him caring really, specially when there is actual little to no real threat of serious injury (sure maybe a couple of broken bones but that will be fixed in a day or 2)
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 6 . 3/19/2015
damn, support? really... i was hoping for a mix between Nanoha and Fate... Support is boring
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 3/19/2015
so far im very much enjoying this... hope he kinda stays how he is, keeping to himself and only really trusting Reinforce
keichan2 chapter 19 . 3/15/2015
I do get the feeling that Isis will have Harry pulling his hairs before long… ;-p

“No, me, Isis, Loki and Reinforce” Uh? I didn’t remember Harry talking about Reinforce to them…
“who is this Reinforce person” My bad! ;-p

Now, to bed, and tomorrow : Reinforced Chamber!
keichan2 chapter 17 . 3/15/2015
Interesting portrait of his parents you painted, here…

“The women in our department gave him a pretty rough time of it for ages after that happened” Bwahahahahahaha!

After “Fate's Gamble”, I can’t help but wonder how you will have the Unspeakables…
keichan2 chapter 14 . 3/15/2015
“like a computer with multiple core processors” which is a concept that was not known by the public in 1991… (early 2000s for the first Intel and AMD dual cores; Though Rockwell International did produce a dual core 4bits processor in the mid 80s…) For the sake of the time-line, I would have used multiple processors computers…
keichan2 chapter 13 . 3/15/2015
“go all out with a single 'Draconifors' spell” Oh? Are you already preparing him for the first task? ;-p

“couldn't afford to lose the man's followers as well” Ah! At least a good reason not to kill them! Though keeping them alive do NOT mean that they should have kept ANY political power (and I count gold in that!), nor any right in society… And especially not the right to raise children: No need for them to pollute the next generation!
As for the delays during rapes, well, maybe helping muggleborns to achieve a status in society would prevent them from going back to the non magical world and add a much needed fresh blood…
To summarize, the “greater good” according to only ONE person, and especially avoiding asking for another’s opinion…
keichan2 chapter 12 . 3/15/2015
OK… Harry’s situation is becoming more and more complex!
It reminds me of another story that had a rather bad ending when it became known… As such, I do wonder if you intend to have that fact known or not…
keichan2 chapter 11 . 3/14/2015
Just got a curious idea:
Given that silver is more valuable than gold in the universe, but not on earth, exchanging the first for the second on administrated worlds, and then the opposite on Earth a few times back and forth might be quite profitable for Harry… Given the uncertainty of his situation with his parents, it might be a good idea to prepare…

As for The Book, if the teachers REALLY thought about ALL they knew about the spells they added, then Harry might learn some very advanced “secrets” of magical theory that could help him for all his spell-work!
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