Reviews for Reinforced Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice one. On to next year. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() "might now" might know "Shoot Barrett" I wonder who's responsible for that translation gaffe of "bullet" in Nanoha. I suppose Dumbledore must still be wanting Harry's good opinion, if he's just going to be contradicted by an eleven year old as to not being his guardian. Indeed I wonder what happened to the purity and innocence of unicorns. Probably the farthest I've seen an HP "go off the reservation". |
![]() ![]() "riffling through" rifling through |
![]() ![]() Corrections offered without malice. "Her skin was a milky white colour, making her very beautiful." -This has unfortunate implications. "bobbles he kept" baubles "speak with you at least" at last Loki's not waiting at all to get up to mischief, bravo. |
![]() ![]() Well, that's an unexpected development. Also, bumblemore mandating stations of canon is a less-often seen pick. Corrections offered without malice. "gotten rid off" rid of |
![]() ![]() "statue of secrecy" I see this one in so many fics. "statute", not statue. |
![]() ![]() "three exists" should be exits |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unicorns probably like removing a maden’s purity |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luna would like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() The boy was Zabini, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, will he get a reinforce-hair wand? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is ...?... he had his face melted, but he kept doing what he was doing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, a great fic. And a good fun read. Thanks for writing this, and bye for now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() i read one of the styles of magic as 'midi-chlorians' and i apologise for doing so |