... are you trying to turn Harry into Vivio?
he'd only need to go blond for that...

Nice start...hope you continue this story

Interesting start, please continue soon.

An intresting start, I look forward to seeing where this could go.

Good Start please continúe soon, also hope something os done at Dome point about his face

Awesome story concept!

I am a long time fan of your stories, but I would like to suggest that you change Harry's appearance for this one. The reason for this being that it seems like you have a tendency to make androgynous or feminine male characters, and this not only bothers some of your readers, but also makes this story appear to be an alternate universe clone of Fate's Gamble. Might I suggest that you retain most of the changes but have him trim his hair short so he has a more masculine appearance in this story? It sounds as if it would still look cool, and would make Harry appear as his own distinct character, clearly separate from FG!Harry. Aside from that this looks like it will be a very interesting story and I would like to see some more of it soon, you have a real talent for writing and I always enjoy your work. Did you perhaps read Sakurademonalchemist's most recent story drabble before creating this one? The scarring in chemistry class is done in almost the exact same way.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

All the best,
Azure

Harryforce? Sounds intresting.

Heh, interesting concept. I look forward to the next chapter.

Will the damage to his face ever get repaired?

I love the idea

I can consider reading this story more since you do very excellent work on your other story. Will be interesting on what you will do next.

It's really, really, interesting! I like how you made Dudley put acid on him, as a reference to Norse Mythology. I think this story is interesting, and Reinforce's relationship with Harry would be quite unique. I hope you will continue it!

This might be a little interesting but I hope that the Dursley's get something from this since how they treat Harry and Dudley is what allowed the little psychopath in this story that they call a son to act the way that he does to others. If not then they start having to deal with what they fear most in Harry and Reinforce not taking it anymore and retaliating for their actions. You know there is something to say about taking a Divine Buster to the face that can change one's mind about treating others.

You have my interest.