... the part of Hel reminds me the last short story drable (66) about Harry Potter from sakurademonalchemist... Anyway, it was interesting. I hope that Harry gets better...

can't wait for the next chapter

I really like the premise of this story, but I could do without the Hel face. I hope you have a good reason for that. We need more Reinforce, but I wonder if unisoning with Reinforce would turn him into a girl like unisoning with Holly does.

Lupine Horror, I'm quite pleased to say that this story will be on my faves and follows list, as well as you.

Now, like other reviewers, I'll ask that you don't have Harry look girly all the time in all your stories... Fate's Gamble and this one are okay, but anything that isn't a spin-off of the two written so far? Well... no, not okay.

Anyway, I hope you get Harry healed by whatever power is available, because disfigurement isn't becoming of him... unless you want to play with the whole 'Hel is awesome' look.

I'll refrain from further comments for the chapter... waiting for the next one.

I feel that I should mention that normally I would never read this due to the Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha, but I figured since I liked Fate's Gamble I would try this out, and it's quite good, I look forward to seeing where this goes.

I like it but the problem is that it is too short. I would like to see where this would go. I also like the way Harry looks in the story it kinda reminds me of the twins in r
Rosen Maiden

Huh...cool, a rather interesting idea all around...I'm actually rather curious as to what he changes to Harry's core will mean, will he be as strong as a Nanoha mage? And will Reinforce be capable of separating from Harry after the unusual reaction? The changes to his personal features were cool, heterochromia, as I think its called is always neat, and that hair change should keep it from being quite so messy, which will divert some of fame attention hopefully.

Really looking forward to more of this, despite what you said about updates, I hope to see more soon, if only to figure out if Harry's face has healed and some of the extent of the changes to himself Reinforce might have noticed.

It looks nice but for the Gods grace wgt for any male HAIR TO HIS WRIST? I could take Harry with low ponytail heck he looks mutch better with such things but any longer? Hell no. More over thsi looking like it would be Fate Gamble but only in another world.

Very nice please keep going make sure you give him the cartridge system...can't wait to see the reaction of the wizards...again very interesting

Is it just me or do you have a tendency to make your characters feminine in that they have long hair?

It was one thing with Harry in Fate's Gamble, but in this one? I would hope that isn't a persistent part of your fics.

And I would dearly hope that you write this character as different from that of Fate's Gamble one. Different childhoods, different backgrounds, different caretakers, etc.

And no, Reinforce in no way would resemble Stheno and Euryale and I would hope that you're not simply going to write her as such in an attempt to have another version of FG Harry except with Reinforce backing him up instead of the Nasu-verse mess.

(happy dance - happy dance - happy dance!)
yup still as good as one would expect from my favorite author!
also really want to see more of this story here...
(insert some way to cheer lupine on without seeming awkward...)
much more feelings of happy and exuberance
-Yay!

well! this one certainly seems to have potential. always a fan of stories that use reinforce, don't think I've seen enough to be able to judge how well you'll write her, but based on the quality of your writing in your other story I don't doubt that you'll manage admirably. looking forward to more.
-c1112

hmm
I will continue reading this simply cause it was made by you

This story has a great amount of potential! I look forward to seeing more of this story even if it is secondary priority! Good luck and keep up the good work.

You have the best timing EVER! I just started watching MGLN two days ago and JUST finished the A's series, so... wow.
Also, yay! I now have two things to look forward to, instead of one!