Reviews for Harry Potter and What Could Have Been
starlite22 chapter 9 . 7/14
Kreacher would know who Bellatrix was as she a Black, she was Sirius' cousin
Guest chapter 5 . 6/23
Good good
Guest chapter 17 . 5/29
Ron never saved this Harry. I'm not convinced that in cannon he actually saved harry from tat pond
Cassandra30 chapter 17 . 5/26
Nice epilogue.
Cassandra30 chapter 16 . 5/26
Much better ending!
Cassandra30 chapter 15 . 5/26
Better! Severus might live now. He deserves a chance at a good life. He never had one yet.
Cassandra30 chapter 14 . 5/26
Honestly I had hoped this might not happen. Flitwick, Remus, Lavender, Seamus all good people all gone much too early. Why couldn't Dumbledore just have told Harry about Severus?
Cassandra30 chapter 13 . 5/26
Hopefully Draco gets out alive. Well Ron has redeemed himself a bit but now Neville doesn't get to show what he is made of.
Cassandra30 chapter 12 . 5/26
Great! Well done!
Cassandra30 chapter 11 . 5/26
Excellent planning!
Cassandra30 chapter 10 . 5/26
Nicely handled.
Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 5/26
Wonderful! Kreacher would have know Bellatrix was a Black. He would have talked about her a bit differently.
Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 5/26
Really good! But they had three to destroy and only destroyed two.
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 5/26
Most excellent! The goblins built the tunnels. They are helping him!
Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 5/26
Way to go! Except Harry should have recognized Griphook.
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