Reviews for Beauty and the Beast Revisioned
Intrigued chapter 2 . 12/22/2014
Please continue this story, it's so well written. I love the way you described Belle's clothes, it flowed with the story perfectly instead of distracting from it like so many other fanfiction author's descriptions do. I would appreciate more details about the city, the landscape, and the culture, that would help with the world building and put a clearer picture of what's happening in your reader's minds. Remember, show, don't tell. Otherwise a great job so far.
-Intrigued