|Reviews for The New Patron Saints And Angels|
| MagatsuIza chapter 16 . 9/6/2016
Hello there, I like to give review after reading Summer Shudder and this one.
I gotta say I am impressed by your writing. It's tender yet there is a roughness in the plot just like my favorite. I don't know why but, after I read you like GoT, I figured it out.
I am disappointed to see you put this story to hiatus, but you have my sentiments in the matter. Just like you I also lost my... groove for Jelsa, whether it's because the lack of aggressiveness in the plot on other story or the number of story that is to my liking, I don't know. But, just know that you're not the only one who lost your groove.
And thank you to give me something to fill my void for a while.
| PurplishBlue Heiress chapter 16 . 5/2/2016
Dear Ms. Storm,
Oh myyyyyy! Hiatus?! It ripped my heart!
This story is one of the most beautiful fic I have ever read. Your writing is amazing, and the puns are hilarious! So Jack-y haha. This story actually makes sense at all. It's believable, and could actually convert into a real movie. The characters were so natural. Very clever about their characteristics btw. The plot is exciting! And your cliffhangers are just so thrilling, making me want to read more.
Just please! Please update. I'll wait! This fic deserves to be finished! Ohhhhh justice Ms. Storm. You're a magnificent writer. Please continue as soon as your Jelsa feels comes back! :)
Your absolute fan when it comes to writing, PurplishBlue Heiress :))
| ArcherOfTheMoon chapter 3 . 3/21/2016
Into the night, u yell absent mindedly, "WHAT TEAM?" And somewhere, Zach Efron wakes up from a restless sleep and replies,"WILDCATS!"
| thataotlover chapter 16 . 2/10/2016
NOOOOOO! You left me hanging! How could you! *look of betrayal* Just kidding. Maybe. Anyway! Just wanted to tell you that you most definitely do not suck at writing Jelsa. This has to be the best Jelsa book I've read so far. The main reason I like it is because you are on of the few authors I know of that actually care about grammar, spelling, etc. I get really pissed off when people ignore that. You balance just the right amount of Jelsa with just the right amount of awkwardness. XD LOVE IT! Sooooo... Keep writing and ship Jelsa!
P.S. Check out Ice Alliance by NopeNotTelling. Great book.
| SSB chapter 7 . 11/5/2015
I wish if you bring more
| San Junipero chapter 16 . 11/28/2014
Truly, I think this is one of the best Jelsa fanfic there is. You portrayed them so realistically and not love at first sight which was a compliment. I do think you should continue this as you mentioned before you're able to tolerate Jelsa now so... But I respect your choice if you don't want to continue. Just keep in mind, it's really nicely written and it's worth continuing.
| Crysalyn chapter 16 . 11/15/2014
You are not portraying the characters in the wrong way - if it any consolation i think the way you portray Jack and Elsa, is more realistic than Disney?dreamwork - that didn't make sense - but i think you get what I mean. I love the emotion that is attached to these characters and trust me i have read many other Jelsa fanfics and none of them have touched my heart like yours did. I actually cried when Jack Overland died in the last story saving his sister and then came back as Jack Frost and Elsa couldn't see him. I honestly had a fangirl moment when I found out you wrote a sequel to summer shudder - i was soo excited. And i like this story even more than the first. Nothing goes better together than war and love. I hope you continue writing this you really have talent. I like to write my own stories (not fan fictions) but someday i hope to be an author and I appreciate a good story - yours is definitely one of my favorites.
I was looking forward to the next chapter. Had a hunch Jack was taking Elsa to see Jamie which would be so cute! Fan of mythology too so I like how you added chronus in the story - it adds a good plot twist. Well I hope you get over writers block and write Jelsa again (love your Jelsa) or you could even write your own book. Up to you though.
| Stephanie Silverfield chapter 16 . 11/12/2014
I understand why you can't write it anymore (I haven't even started writing mine yet and I feel horribly nervous over it and its causing huge writer's block), but I love all of the puns. I read a lot, I'm not a good writer, but I have read enough to know that this is an awesome story.
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/28/2014
This is honestly one of the best Jelsa fan fictions I have read. I understand why you can't write it anymore, but your writing style is funny (and I honestly didn't notice most of the puns). The thing is: I read a lot, I'm not a good writer, but I have read enough to know that this fanfic is good. It's witty, funny, and has a plot that just draws you in. And as I pretend to do homework while writing this; I just want to say excellent job on this, I really love it.
| AvatarFreak17 chapter 16 . 9/6/2014
Hmm... Well, I guess I'll go back to The List (Where I bookmark a thousand fanfictions that I want to read)... I'll follow this story anyways, just in case. I'd advise you to mention in the summary that this is on hiatus, so you don't end up disappointing any readers. Please know that I love your writing, and I'm sure others do too. Do you have any original works on other sites, like fictionpress? If you do, I'd love to read what you have there.
| FrozenMockingay chapter 16 . 9/1/2014
Please update again! I love this story and you're not a bad writer at all! I'm hooked and I can't stand this being the end…
| Elizabeth Newsom chapter 16 . 8/8/2014
Well, despite what you said, I think you're doing a phenomenal job! This is one of the few stories that does Jack and Elsa justice, but I know how you feel. I often have this writing 'high,' but tend to lose inspiration as the story progresses. And I think how you integrate Rise of the Guardians and Frozen is ingenious and how you added Chronos. The stories flow together seamlessly. Please work on this at your next opportunity it's a wonderful story! Thank you for the parts you've written so far. It's been a joy reading them :) I'll be on the look out for the next part!
| winter's precious snowflake chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
This a long and cool chapter just ehat I like instead of 200 worded chapters! Love the first chapter it is amazing!
| Kyubbiman chapter 2 . 7/18/2014
Hmm Jack Overland dying that's not subtle at all. I want to hear more
| tamara chapter 16 . 7/9/2014
Pues ha mi me gusta lo que estas haciendo y escribiendo no te desanimes