Reviews for Moving On
Dawn369 chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
Dreamy loved this. It was so good. Very nice.
MeTuKa chapter 11 . 10/24/2002
Yes! Nick gets the girl. No Rae. Being the evil one I am, I would just have to flaunt Nick's love in her face. lol

Great story!
Nicky chapter 11 . 10/23/2002
I like this story. I didn't think Rae and Nick looked right together anyway. I'd like to see more. Is there a sequel in the works?
Lula1 chapter 11 . 10/23/2002
No, no, no! Don't be finished yet!

I want to see more...maybe a sequel? Huh? Huh?

Pretty please!

Loved it...oh yes...

Lula
Lula1 chapter 10 . 10/23/2002
Wow...I've had chills through this chapter!

Absolutely beautiful!

Oh yeah! I bet that little green monster in Rae was just running rampant...lololol...when he kissed Michelle like that in front of everyone...oh yeah...lol

Glad to see that her family came for her...

Lula
Lula1 chapter 9 . 10/23/2002
Very nice! Hmmm...so she has fallen in love with him...oh yeah...I can understand that!

Well, well, well...the jealousy goes on..and on...and on...lol...such scorn! Well Rae...get over it! LOLOL

Enjoyed it as usual...

Lula
Lula1 chapter 8 . 10/23/2002
Can I see a show of hands?...How many of us would like to slap that nasty attitude out of Rae? Hmmm...I bet there are a lot of hands raised! LOL

Whoooo...I bet that gave the other nurse an idea of what Rae really thinks of nurses, overall.

I'm glad that it seems that Nick can work through

Rae's mischievious gossip...to straighten out this situation...and let Michelle know how he really feels...and not to place so much faith in idle gossip...

Yeah, oh yeah...definitely...they need to hire you to write the script...lolol...definitely would bring the overall show up, not several, but many notches in intensity and interest...(I like the story anyways, but I like your version much, much more!)...

Lula
Lula1 chapter 7 . 10/22/2002
Hey...this is very, very good!

I think that they need to employ you to write the script for the show! You are such an excellent writer...! You have effectively kept me riveted to the screen...

Well, I'll review the rest tomorrow...I've read 7 chapters straight...lol...getting tooooo sleepy...lol

Lula
Lula1 chapter 6 . 10/22/2002
Very nice Nick! I liked that little surprise that it threw Rae...lol...

True, though, Rae might have feelings for Nick, but she can't have everything...

Yes, definitely, I wouldn't mind having a bad dream and Nick waking me up...lol!

LOLOLOL...nice package...huh? LOL...that was cute! I'm sure that he does...lol

Enjoying the story soooo much!

Lula
Tasha chapter 11 . 10/22/2002
YES! Why the heck can't the writers at PM write something this good? I loved it all, but it would have even been better if Rae tripped in the parking lot and broke her nose or something. GRRRR...don't like that woman. But excellent story. Write more! Write more!
Lula1 chapter 5 . 10/22/2002
OH! The torment of mixed emotions! Getting pulled this way...no, not yet...lets go this way instead...lolol...

Talk about an adonis! You put it perfectly in words...'If the gods were making a shining example of masculine beauty, there is no doubt you were the result.'

What a tormenting situation...lol...for both of them! But, I've got the feeling that things are going to work out 'just' fine...lololol

I really like this story!

Lula
Khalessa chapter 11 . 10/22/2002
I waited to review because fan fic has been bad the last few days, but this is a really good peice
Lula1 chapter 4 . 10/22/2002
Ooooh...a romantic place to go and view the Golden Gate Bridge...hmmm...I wonder what's up her sleeve...

Like it very much!

Lula
Lula1 chapter 3 . 10/22/2002
All I've got to say is "You GO Michelle!"

Loved it...Rae confronting her and Michelle turning the tables on Rae and chewing her out some...

Hmmmmm...wonder, oh wonder...will he show up...? I bet he will...

Lula
Lula1 chapter 2 . 10/22/2002
Interesting...I wonder what that was all about? Michelle jumping up...it must have been something really bad...

I agree with Michelle though...how could Rae let go of that one...lol

And well, I agree with Nick's feelings too...Rae seems to 'have' just used him for her own selfish needs...pitiful thing to do...

Great job...

Lula
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