Reviews for Phantom of the Opera
kawaiilileevee chapter 8 . 3/14/2014
So Lance killed Ashline and then himself? That's awful *cries* it would have been better if Brock had died and Ashline had gone back to Lance...
kawaiilileevee chapter 7 . 3/14/2014
I can't see this possibly ending well... Brock is not likely to get out of the torture chamber, and Lance is not going to listen to Ashline since she already betrayed him!
kawaiilileevee chapter 6 . 3/14/2014
Ash did lose the ring, so Lance will have his revenge! And Brock sure took full advantage of it. Is Ashline really in love with Brock, or is she just saying so now that she's terrified of Lance?
kawaiilileevee chapter 5 . 3/14/2014
No, Ash! Don't betray Lance by telling Brock! And I can totally imagine Lance being in a furious temper and yelling at her. They did have sex, didn't they? Lance is probably writing in his own blood and not red ink as he is playing the organ. That would fit him. I certainly don't imagine Lance as a living corpse, though, because wouldn't she have noticed if he was bony?
kawaiilileevee chapter 4 . 3/14/2014
So Ashline spent a month with Lance, and all they did was kiss when she was leaving? Lance was quite the gentleman, then! I do wish you had described what they had done in more detail... I guess they had singing lessons but they must have spent their days together doing something! I'm glad Ash put Brock in his place! He isn't her boyfriend so he shouldn't be hounding her!
kawaiilileevee chapter 3 . 3/14/2014
I really like all the descriptions of food and Ashline's pretty room and Lance is wearing a white mask that covers his whole face but he still has his angelic voice! Maybe Ash is too innocent to connect him with the Phantom of the Opera! I like the way Lance has golden eyes like a cat's and long, dark red hair that is almost black. It sounds pretty. And Lance did not kill Brock, which was unexpected...
kawaiilileevee chapter 2 . 3/14/2014
Carlotta is 'The Pain', right? That's why you named her 'de paine'? That's funny! So Ashline does know that the Opera Ghost wears a mask, so what if she sees her Angel? Would Lance still wear his mask? Can he cast illusions to make himself appear handsome? That *would* solve the problem...
kawaiilileevee chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
The roles do fit! Ashline is naive, and Lance is the slightly evil older man. So Ashline seems to be falling in love with Lance's voice, and Lance does care for her, enough to teach her to sing and to heal her. I hope everything goes well and they get together. Will she realize that Lance is the Phantom? That might ruin things...