What a great story. So happy to have stumbled on this.

Great scene!

This was really, really good. I always like it when someone writes a good "in-between scenes" scene.

Excellent missing scene ! Luved it !

More please!

Long time reader of your works and you've hit the nail on the head again with this one. Just discovered the Musketeers and am enjoying all these fics I'm finding. Please continue to write, your stories are wonderful.

You really are incredibly talented. I am rather impressed with this story. Also, your other stories are rather impressive as well. You write with a certain panache; likewise, your descriptive language is excellent. Your dialogue shows great skill and an awareness of the characters. I haven't been reading fanfiction for a while because a lot of it lacks that skill set you so eminently display. This both presents a great plot and the sort believable fluffy-whump that really interest me. It's feelingshigh quality writing. Spectacular.

This is beautifully written. I can visualise the entire scene, the characters are accurately portrayed, the sentiment subtle but moving. It feels like a deleted scene. Love it.

thanks for filling that hole i didn't even realized there was until i read your story here

I'm making up ground on some or the stories I have missed and this is wonderful. I've just re-watched the episode while reading this and you've done a great job of fleshing it out further. Thank you!

Oh, so masterfully written, like all your stories! I especially liked the banter between them, Porthos and Aramis so comfy with each other and d'Artagnan realizing what quality people he's been lucky enough to fall in with. You write them all so perfectly-especially Porthos' totally understated, to the point dialogue.

"When did you last eat?"Aramis demanded
"Um..." d'Artagnan managed.
"That's never the right answer" Porthos observed.

So perfectly them. Love it! Thank you for filling in yet another missing spot that really needed to be seen!

I love this addition to the first episode. I liked how well Aramis and Portos communicated without using words and their gentle actions to assist an injured D'Artagnan, both physically and emotionally. My favorite part was near the end. "His father had always told him that the worth of a man could be measured by those he could call friends. If that was the case, then Athos must be one of the finest of men, d'Artagnan decided." Lovely ending. Thanks for sharing your time and talents with us!

That was really good.

Excellent! Just catching up on the episodes here in the states and now the stories make so much more sense.

Love this for the comfort and the heart between them, the strength they gather from the newly found love and friendship. The way they take the young Gascon to heart based on his actions even though he was wrong.

Nice job

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