Reviews for Hot One
NarutoandKakashiFan chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
me likie toby sernading the speedster
Poetic-Mind chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Lovely!
Newspaper-heart chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
Hey Becs,

Just wanna say that I love your stories. An can ya write one with them meetin Wanda just with Toby and stuff!

Ooh and can u send me a pic of Toby and Mel, that'd be awesome! Thanx

Soz I sound real weird here so anywho my e-mail is

Thanx again
sylver rain chapter 1 . 4/16/2003
gosh that was cute.. _ lurved pie pie.. and lurve the way toby's all obsessed wid speedy..
Russ chapter 1 . 12/16/2002
Great story. Cute.

What would Pietro do if Toby got himself a boyfriend? How could he handle the lack of fawning?
me chapter 1 . 10/18/2002
Charming as always Becs _ And the count down begins!

A few mistakes, like you had Pietro frowning and smacking *Pietro’s* hand away angrily. Which isn't what you meant I'm sure _
redrose2310 chapter 1 . 10/18/2002
That was funny I think any way, oh while i got your eye been having a lil' truoble with the site so it'll be alittle while before i can get your new stuff up but i'll let you know when it's fix

P.S. love the Mad Pietro he's just soooo cute when he's like that aaaaaaawwwwwww! hehe

peace out
Vanima Nwalmaer chapter 1 . 10/18/2002
Good one! I loved it.