Reviews for Hot One
NarutoandKakashiFan chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
me likie toby sernading the speedster
Poetic-Mind chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Lovely!
Newspaper-heart chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
Hey Becs,

Just wanna say that I love your stories. An can ya write one with them meetin Wanda just with Toby and stuff!

Ooh and can u send me a pic of Toby and Mel, that'd be awesome! Thanx

Soz I sound real weird here so anywho my e-mail is

Thanx again
sylver rain chapter 1 . 4/16/2003
gosh that was cute.. _ lurved pie pie.. and lurve the way toby's all obsessed wid speedy..
Russ chapter 1 . 12/16/2002
Great story. Cute.

What would Pietro do if Toby got himself a boyfriend? How could he handle the lack of fawning?
me chapter 1 . 10/18/2002
Charming as always Becs _ And the count down begins!

A few mistakes, like you had Pietro frowning and smacking *Pietro’s* hand away angrily. Which isn't what you meant I'm sure _
redrose2310 chapter 1 . 10/18/2002
That was funny I think any way, oh while i got your eye been having a lil' truoble with the site so it'll be alittle while before i can get your new stuff up but i'll let you know when it's fix

P.S. love the Mad Pietro he's just soooo cute when he's like that aaaaaaawwwwwww! hehe

~~~~~~~~~peace out~~~~~
Vanima Nwalmaer chapter 1 . 10/18/2002
Good one! I loved it.