|Reviews for The Secrets We Keep|
| Judyblue95 chapter 39 . 5/21
subtle, not saddle. gesture, not jester.
| Judyblue95 chapter 38 . 5/21
prowess, not proneness. callous, not callus.
| Judyblue95 chapter 27 . 5/21
| Judyblue95 chapter 18 . 5/21
This reader LOVES the recap!
| Judyblue95 chapter 17 . 5/21
I'm sorry. I know you asked to be told about spelling and grammar mistakes but I just can't. There have been, and continue to be anywhere from 2 to 10 mistakes in each chapter. I enjoy the story and know what you mean through these errors but I won't point them out anymore. In my experience that only makes the writer angry. I do very much enjoy this story!
| Judyblue95 chapter 15 . 5/21
outdo not out due. last paragraph.
| Judyblue95 chapter 14 . 5/21
eavesdropping...first line correction.
| Judyblue95 chapter 10 . 5/21
hi i'm back again today for more! ooh Jessica is in for a rude awakening!
| Judyblue95 chapter 5 . 5/20
I really like what you're doing with this recap stuff. I've never seen that done before.
I do see that Edward has some issues here and love the names you've given him.
| Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 5/20
some friends were discussing mob fics today and this one came up. i'm going to give it a go as i have/am read/reading a few others of yours and like all i've seen. i may not comment every chapter like i do when reading a wip
| blb1000 chapter 47 . 5/20
Nice! Thank you for finishing another fantastic story. No news here on who she hired to replace Jess & Ang in her shop?
| blb1000 chapter 46 . 5/19
As long as she gets to continue her business, she can be happy no matter who she's marrying.
| blb1000 chapter 45 . 5/19
Is a little late, but I loved your choice of the name, Jane Payne!
| blb1000 chapter 43 . 5/19
Didn't she have flowers for 3 weddings to deliver today?
| blb1000 chapter 42 . 5/19
Whew! Good suspense.