looking forward to more if you ever get around to it keep up the great work

Glad I found this fic, I hope it continues. _

Harry really needs to get his head out of his arse and work on sharing his feelings with Hermione. If wards can detect the use of the word "mudblood", why can't they detect the casting of dark or unforgivable curses?

I wonder why the life debt doesn't kill Snape for trying or at least assisting in the death of the on that holds it over him?

Too bad that Harry does not know about the life debt owed by Severus; if he did he could call it in and force Snape to at better...or drop dead.

I have enjoyed the story thus far and look forward to more.

I hope you pick this up again someday. I was liking whee this was going. Good work!

I love love this story so much. But I'm a little confused. Did crouch/Snape cast the imperius on the mermen to make them that aggressive? I understand that Hermione is awake since Pomfrey was put under the imperius, (which made me so sad when she was arrested :( I love Poppy) but did he also provoke the mermen?

Also, on the subject of Harry's animagus form:

Some stories make him a male version of Hermione's animagus form. I'm not sure I love that idea, but it could be a last resort.

You could also make them both the same type of animal, like both of them as birds (but different species of birds) or large cats (Panther, jaguar, lion, etc)

For Harry, I have a couple ideas.
Firstly, will he have one animagus form, or multiple animagus forms? Maybe one non magical form, and one magical? Maybe one land creature and one sea creature?
There's always a host of mythical creatures to choose from, like a dragon, a leviathan, a kraken, a phoenix, a nundu, a chimera, a basilisk, etc. While those forms are cool, especially in battle, sometimes they can get a little corny. I love the idea of a powerful Harry though, so a powerful animagus form could fit.

There are also real animals to choose from. In my opinion, I don't really see Harry as a non magical animal. Of course, the magical animals I named above are all massive and flashy. But there are others.

Just a little plot twist what if his animagus form was one of another magical race? I wonder how that would turn out if Harry was a vampire, veela, merman, dementor, or werewolf animagus. I once saw this story where Harry was a ghost animagus.

His animagus, or primary animagus name would probably be some attribute of that animal. Hope this helps! And I hope you update it soon! Then again, I love your other story as well. Eagerly waiting for an update :)

My heart just stopped. Harry's timing must have been precise. A few minutes later and she would've drowned

This was so cute :)

I love how this story is sweet, but not overly sweet. It has some sad spots that balances it out, and makes it more realistic

This is started to get sappy, but as a hopeless romantic, I love it even more :)

:) Love it so much. I hope it's updated soon

Heh I thought that Snape would be good in this story. But to be honest, I don't really like Snape. Loving this story even more

Not gonna lie I cried a teeny bit right here. Love it :)