|Reviews for A MODern Man|
| Lufio chapter 8 . 8/2
Shoulder Tom and Snape,
At the start of this chapter,
Crack me up each time.
| bearblue chapter 10 . 7/23
Brilliant, fun read. More please, when you feel the muse fprevit. Thank you for sharing this!
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 7/18
props to luna for her BS/wisdom
| KrisB-71854 chapter 10 . 7/15
Um, question. Why would Luna have lost any hair? I know that they were looking at Harry being fire proof, but you sort of made that a non issue with the Veela First Flame bit.
Shouldn't have been all the kiddos that have been healed up by the flame? Oh, I can see Harry being he only one brave/stupid enough to stay in the fire and not even really notice.
The girls likely woke up thought fire bad and jumped away or such. So how did mental Snape and Tom react to the Flame? I'd call them imperfections to be purified. ;) But they are also great fun as well.
I like Harry with the girls. He seems to be having fun. I can't help but feeling that Death is the one that he is really dating the most out of all of them though.
I like the light funny bit as it sets. I'm not really sure that I want the plot to move on ward to the usual stuff.
Have you ever read Harry Potter and Just Some Island by M-python-girl? She just sort of skips/skims over through the years that we all know about and just focuses on the summer and what she is actually doing "different."
You do a ton of great stand alone fics. A format like that might be useful for you as well. I know you could have fun with it with your various snippets.
Hmm, so will we see Narcissa and Draco? Ron has been mentioned by Luna, but how much interaction do they actually have with the Weasleys?
I can see that previous Harry was grumpy and picked on his sisters and the girls alot. So did he have any friends that will notice changes and wonder why he is playing nice with the girls now? The adults just seem happy that the kids are over/through that phase.
| fyrecathotmail chapter 10 . 7/2
Gah! Another awesome fic left hanging! I hope your muse falls in a giant vat of brain viagra and forces you to finish all of your fics.
| kelwin chapter 10 . 6/24
lovely fic. hope you will write more.
| dialNforNinja chapter 10 . 6/16
This continues to be worlds better than the original SilverFawkes challenge. Also hilarious and cute by turns, since that's a low bar to clear.
| yo chapter 10 . 6/13
enjoyable chapter thank you
| kanazak chapter 10 . 6/15
So uh... whaaa?
This was really entertaining, but I'm feeling rather confused, like there's some backstory I'm missing. .
| Meep the Moose chapter 10 . 6/12
It's a blinking update, HUZZAH!
| imgonnadie chapter 10 . 6/13
Excellent story so far.
| Shivers82 chapter 10 . 6/12
Love the story, looking forward to more.
tanned skinned and :: tanned skin and
| Jostanos chapter 10 . 6/12
*chuckles* Your group certainly knows how to make me laugh and I appreciate you for doing so. Please continue with this story. Thank you.
| Firehedgehog chapter 10 . 6/12
| Fibinaci chapter 10 . 6/12
This was nice. And nice new veela concept that I hadn't read before which made sense.