Reviews for Pieces out of Line
James chapter 6 . 7/31
There isn't supposed to be a common name between yang and ruby they have two different mothers
Parks98 chapter 3 . 6/30
Hehe ren reminds me of shikamaru
lazyguy90 chapter 31 . 6/5
Nice work.

Keep at it.
le BlekSzedou chapter 31 . 5/16
Oh hell yeah, it's time for Kiritsugu to kick ass and show why exactly he's considered a badass :D

Also read this entire fic in one day and it's very nice, keep up the good work :)
Will.Always.Be.There chapter 31 . 5/16
Finally. It lives. By God im in dying need of an update. Flower is nice but this is the one fic that made me look flower up. Thanks a lot.
Googlemo chapter 1 . 4/23
Bad, Del.
The Writer Of Fate chapter 3 . 4/12
You turned Ren into a Nara?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
no offence but your grammar feels too stiff at times as if there's no emotion in the words, so, this is just a suggestion but maybe see if someone will beta your story or get someone to proof read it so it doesn't come across as dull when the characters are speaking. Again just a suggestion. Apart from that this story is interesting and i think you could do really well with this, so until then cant wait for more and hope you take this into consideration thank you.
adv chapter 30 . 4/2
great chapter
Kuro kaze no aka kira chapter 1 . 3/30
Huh. Jaune's axed? Shame. Interesting stuff, though.
PredatorPuck chapter 23 . 3/1
Complete AU indeed
PredatorPuck chapter 17 . 3/1
Hahah poor shirou, but how the hell shirou know magecraft
PredatorPuck chapter 15 . 3/1
Huh so completely AU then?
PredatorPuck chapter 13 . 3/1
Hahah superhero shirou
PredatorPuck chapter 11 . 3/1
Hmm Shirou could be good teacher... I can see it clearly
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