Reviews for Tsumetai
kawaiilileevee chapter 9 . 3/16/2014
Aww... I guess Red has abandoned Kanto since it has been destroyed and he's just going to stay with Lance from now on. He still doesn't know what Lance did, either...
kawaiilileevee chapter 8 . 3/16/2014
Oh! Red has his own healing power but it is different from Viridian's Power. I see! And I wish you had written more lemon, maybe with Lance showing Red how cruel he could be with BDSM and stuff but oh well...
kawaiilileevee chapter 7 . 3/16/2014
Well, Lance has been taking care of Red, and he did get badly injured trying to protect him, and he is seductive... Red is acting a little OOC, I think, because he's crying. Clearly Lance has some control over his body, though, because it looks like he's dominating the boy even when he's injured!
kawaiilileevee chapter 6 . 3/16/2014
It's funny how Red thinks Lance is a nice person deep down inside. Lance isn't nice - he just wants Red's power and he chose him to join the Elite Four. But, he did attack a Pokmon to protect Red, so now he wonders if he has feelings for him. I think he does have feelings for Red, even if he won't admit it. Ooh, I wonder how Giovanni knew who Lance was? Maybe Sabrina or Lt. Surge escaped Cerise Island and told him about the Elite Four? But they've never met, have they?
kawaiilileevee chapter 5 . 3/16/2014
Lance is coddling Red, isn't he, and treating him nicely. No wonder Red likes him. Well, they can't take the Magnet Train to Kanto anymore, so they have to go through Tohjo falls. I can't believe Red still expects to be able to find Professor Oak and Bill! He is naive... And Lance attacked a Pokemon to protect Red! Does he have feelings for Red, now? I think its cool how he carries needles in his wrist holsters.
kawaiilileevee chapter 4 . 3/16/2014
How funny! Charlotte showed up to bring them supplies. I guess she approves of Lance's plan to catch Red. And Red made the first move! He wanted Lance to take him... I wonder how he'll feel when he finds out what Lance has done? Although, maybe he's just lonely? Sex doesn't equal love...
kawaiilileevee chapter 3 . 3/16/2014
I'm not sure Red is a virgin anymore, but hopefully Lance wouldn't go that far with an unconscious prisoner, would he? And Red clearly knows what going to bed means, but apparently he doesn't consider sex exercise. The thought of Lance checking his e-mail is funny, but they do have computers in the Pokemon world.
kawaiilileevee chapter 2 . 3/16/2014
Red woke up naked in bed with Lance! No wonder he was freaked out. And then Lance admitted that he's been taking care of him for a while. Red clearly isn't that innocent, then... And Lance is keeping Red cold to keep him close. How clever! This forces them to share a bed... and body heat!
kawaiilileevee chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Lance is good at taking advantage of Red. So he kept Red away and hid in the lava until the other Trainers left. That was smart! And now he's molesting Red in his sleep...