Reviews for Shop Horror
xBandanaRosesx chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
So cute
animerules4ever chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
I am blown away by the cuteness of it all O.o
love you stories
Lapiz14 chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Especially the Ending...SOoooo Cute...! :) :D
U should definitely write more double fanficx...xD
Josh Spicer chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
No that seems on par to how Max would react.

Love the story. Great fluff all around. Question though. One shot or no? I'm on my phone so it doesn't tell me...
ShyRaven23 chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
I really enjoyed your fic and love how you tell it and how you write it but I hope you do not mind but...May's hair is brown not purple. Maybe you could change it to improve your fic? I love the flow of friendly banter between May and Dawn but I find it a bit hard to follow...maybe you could find a way to help it flow better by shortening parts and swapping lots of words for one or two? I like how you change to show May's POV but I feel like you jumped and suddenly gone from where they were before to the new place, maybe you could change that by putting a little bit extra into the 'May POV' part letting everyone know? I love how you have written the play between the characters and how their personalities and words and actions play so well with each other and bounce off of each other but fit together like a jigsaw puzzle. I really enjoyed the fic but it felt too long to be a one shot, maybe you could try breaking it down into a small multichapter fic to help turn it into more readable sized parts? I love your fic and I hope I've not messed up on giving you some constructive information. Either way wonderful work
Giulietta Marescotti chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Aw! That was sooo sweet and cute! Poor guys had to carry so many bags. I LOVE IT!
ImitationEve chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
so cute! great job and well done!
XxCherriesandChocolatexX chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Woohooo it's finally up! Loved it, this story was awesome! Of course Paul, just go and forgot May's name...THAT'S DREW'S JOB!

Awwww Ikarishipping! Paul can deny it all he wants, Dawn has him wrapped around her little perfect pinky XD
Awesome story, loved it all and laughed so hard at some bits :D

This story is full of cuteness! Gaaaah! *fangirls*
stocky-parker-dog chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Ha, ha, ha. Max was all cool and nonchalant for seeing his sister and Drew like that. Just walk in, 'oh hey, you're together, you could've done it somewhere else'. Ha, ha, funny. I love it. So cutesy!