|Reviews for Chain Reaction|
| Shawn Raven chapter 1 . 1/21
Tragic and cruel indeed, history is. All we can do is read it and take into account to not repeat it in the future...
Such is the way of the world.
| PrincessOfSparta chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
A nice little overview, with an interesting narrative - well done :)
| America chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
The story seemed very in character and you have a very distinct voice! It really seemed like it was the character talking and that's a hard thing to accomplish. It sounded mature as well so the language and word choice was excellent.
The dots and punctuation such as "All this loss...sorrow..." Is usually something that I dislike, but you really made it work!
The length was good as well, usually I prefer longer, but shorter really worked here! It kept your attention.
The paragraph about Hector had many good words as well and I would love to see more here from you!