|Reviews for Prelude|
| CJ chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
I love your work so much! It is my favorite fan-fiction of all time and the only story on here that I will ever review. I have literally read it like a dozen times, but it never gets old. Keep up the great work! _
| Serp chapter 26 . 5/11/2011
By far the best origin story I've ever read. It's a real shame you haven't continued it (unless you decided to stop and become a real author XD). I recommend this story to everyone, it's amazing.
FYI: Father Thomas remains my favourite OC, though Crys comes a close second.
| Chaura chapter 26 . 8/1/2010
Amazing story! I love how you write. My absolute favorite lines are from Vicious: "Better that he's alive. Every man needs a good enemy." I love the foreshadowing in that sentence of Spike and Vicous' relationship. Please update and finish this work of art!
| MaddMax chapter 26 . 5/27/2010
cmon upload another chapter! :P
| Craig chapter 25 . 10/28/2009
Love it. Update please.
| danicadoodles chapter 25 . 9/23/2009
Wonderful story. Splendidly written. Write more please!
| Ale chapter 25 . 9/21/2009
Haha! You write so beautifully; I can't wait for more :(
It seems as though this story has been going very slowly for a very long time...so I'm hoping I won't have to wait too long for an update, but I'm willing to wait for it :D
As I've said before, this fanfic is fantastic. So far, you have given every character three dimensions, even your own characters. Normally author characters are a real turn off, but I find yours to be rather endearing. Furthermore, you manage to keep all of the Bebop characters acting in ways that make it feel as though this fanfic is the real truth to the events before the show (although that's obviously what you were going for, most authors fail, and for your so-far success, you should be commended).
I love the cute moments as well as the serious moments, and you certainly seem to have done some research to have so accurately depicted some of the scenes that you include. It's those little extra details that make your story seem so special.
Anyways, my point is that this is an amazing fic and I wanted to express my gratitude to you for writing it. Even if I'm secretly hoping to flatter you into writing more in the hopefully near future xD
| Ale chapter 19 . 9/20/2009
Another great chapter! I'm loving it even though it's keeping me from completing my homework xD
| Ale chapter 18 . 9/14/2009
Aw, everyone calls the bird ugly...but I always thought it was pretty/cute XD
Another great chapter _
| Ale chapter 17 . 9/14/2009
I think this chapter is my favorite one so far :D
I love the interaction between Spike and the cop, and I'm a bit suprised that Spike didn't try to go after Dozanti himself for deceiving him XD
| Ale chapter 15 . 9/13/2009
I love how you write Vicious.
| Ale chapter 14 . 9/13/2009
I'm loving this so much. You're writing is astounding. I hope you are still continuing this story _
| Ale chapter 13 . 9/13/2009
This story is so amazingly well written; I can't believe I hadn't found it until today! I love your style, it's so incredibly believable and addictive. I've read it straight through and now it's almost 3 AM...but I still need to finish. But then again, if I finish now I won't have any more to read later. Such a dilema :P
Anyways, I love it, and I noticed that the latest chapter was updated this month...Wow...You're still going strong. I hope this tale never ends. I love it so much. It's easily one of the best (if not THE best) fanfics I've ever read.
| Maxine chapter 25 . 9/3/2009
PLEASE write more! When will you update next?
| Lollypop chapter 24 . 5/13/2009
I absolutely love your writing style and the story overall! I wish you would continue it! I can not wait to see when Spike and Julia actually get together…or just meet. _ Please update soon!